Jack Ellison Poet Quatrain

Notes About The Poem

Passion Raging

I taste your lips
Sense your presence
Dream while awake
Suffer in silence

Thinking of you
Craving your touch
Raging with fever
Desire's too much

Close my eyes
In need of a rest
Think of you more
Mind's in distress

Imagine your lips
Warm with charm
My aching body
Longs for your arms

Hunger your kiss
Need you near
Twenty-four seven
I pray you hear

I taste your lips
Sense your presence
Dream while awake
Suffer in silence



© Jack Ellison 2013

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Joy Wellington January 27, 2013 at 11:15 PM A beauty Jack, filled with all the longing of a lovelorn soul. Nicely written my friend! Thanks for visiting. One love! Joy Wells Jack Ellison January 28, 2013 at 5:35 AM Thank you kindly my dear Joy! Hope you have a great day! Hugs, Jack xox

Carl Harris January 27, 2013 at 1:51 PM This well and vivldly expressed poem, Jack, was a pleasure to read, largely because of your terse style throughout this fine poem whicn enhanced the intensity of your words. Carl. Jack Ellison January 27, 2013 at 3:30 PM Wow! Those are very kind words my friend... thanks a bunch! Cheers, Jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 26, 2013 at 9:24 PM fantastic piece Jack .. full of intense lines of deep emotion and alluring passion .. so good to be back and read u luv..on slow mend but grateful to return luv .. Jack Ellison January 27, 2013 at 6:59 AM So great to see you back... you are loved here!!! Thank you for your sweet words this morning! Have a super day dear Linda... love ya! Huggs, Jack xox

Donna Jones January 26, 2013 at 5:27 PM Well well that one about the cute bum got ya going? Hahahaha nice....... Jack Ellison January 26, 2013 at 5:48 PM LOVE cute bums... never too old! LOL

Richard Lamoureux January 26, 2013 at 3:50 PM Wow Jack! I like this departure, letting out your inner freak. The sexy side of Jack! Watch out ladies. Jack Ellison January 26, 2013 at 4:11 PM All youse guys haven't got a chance now!!! No amount of charm will be enough!!! SORRY!

Demetrios Trifiatis January 26, 2013 at 12:21 PM Dear Jack,what a wonderful surprise to see something so romantic written by YOU! Beautifully written with a vigor worthy of a young man that you are! I am back, thanks God! Thank you for your comment. Jack Ellison January 26, 2013 at 1:45 PM Glad to hear from you again, my friend... thought you were taking a break! What! Surprised you eh, with a romantic poem! Thank you for the "young man" comment! LOL

Carol Eastman January 26, 2013 at 10:34 AM Are you dreaming of lunch? Hoogies and subways are deliscious... Not to mention BLT's... That Bacon is the hardest to forget... It D.R.A.W.S... me like dracula's call... Help me... I can't resist... .... I'm coming... I'm coming... I'm lost... Yum... Yum... Jack Ellison January 26, 2013 at 1:42 PM No, silly! Have you been into the hard stuff again, my dear sweet Carol??? LOL Big huggeroonies, Jake xoxoxox

Toquyen Harrell January 26, 2013 at 9:36 AM Are you in a dog house, Jack? Lol! Great write. Enjoyed! Jack Ellison January 26, 2013 at 1:40 PM Quite different for me huh? Thanks my friend... hugs, Jack xox

Shaz Cheesman January 26, 2013 at 6:45 AM Jack......what a poetry charm you have written here! Very nice - Shaz Jack Ellison January 26, 2013 at 6:49 AM You are the sweetest... a big bunch of love and hugs, my dear friend Shaz! Jack

Dominic Amezimi January 26, 2013 at 6:12 AM vintage english writing... direct ... just great Jack Ellison January 26, 2013 at 6:40 AM Very nice review, my good friend... thank you! Cheers, Jack

Debbie Guzzi January 26, 2013 at 5:56 AM Wonderful write glad to read you being a bit serious ;) Light & Love Jack Ellison January 26, 2013 at 6:40 AM See... I'm not just another pretty face! LOL Big hugs, Jack xox