Shadow Hamilton Poet Rhyme

Passion Pays, Not Patience

Of all that is free in life
there's one that stands out
passion without any strife
that's what it's all about

Take patience and passion
and mix the two together
until they part in fission
neither now the aggressor

In total harmony they meet
patience adding temperance
for'bearingly giving us mete
now loving without hinderance

written 09/03/2013

contest Passion Pays, Not Patience

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Robin Davis June 21, 2014 at 9:39 PM Shadow A nice write that combines two elements of life we all need. Nice job Thank you for the great comment on my I Did It My Way poem.

Seren Roberts September 23, 2013 at 1:04 AM Many congrats Shadow ...Seren

Seren Roberts September 23, 2013 at 12:53 AM Shadow many Congratulations ....Seren

Richard Lamoureux September 22, 2013 at 9:21 PM I am so glad to see this poem on the winners list. One of my personal favorites. Shadow Hamilton September 23, 2013 at 2:22 PM Hi Richard I am glad you like it so much Ty Shadow x smile

Poet Destroyer A September 22, 2013 at 8:40 PM lovely win...Shadow... Linda Shadow Hamilton September 23, 2013 at 2:22 PM ty Linda appreciated Shadow x smile

Sara Kendrick September 22, 2013 at 6:46 PM Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara Shadow Hamilton September 23, 2013 at 2:23 PM ty Sara so happy you enjoyed it Shadow x smile

Joe Maverick September 21, 2013 at 2:05 PM Hello Shadow, good read here and many good wishes for the furure..' Shadow Hamilton September 22, 2013 at 5:19 AM Hi Joe Ty for your inspiring review Shadow x smile

Carrie Richards September 21, 2013 at 9:05 AM You have woven the two so beautifully, Shadow !! Congrats on your winning poem!! Shadow Hamilton September 21, 2013 at 9:24 AM Carrie Ty dear lady you always inspire Shadow x smile

Sandra Adams September 21, 2013 at 8:46 AM I like how you combined passion and patience, together, as if one...great write, congrats on your win :) Shadow Hamilton September 21, 2013 at 9:23 AM Hi Sandra and Ty separately they work together they an inferno lol Shadow x smile

Joseph May September 21, 2013 at 8:25 AM congrats on your win Shadow Shadow Hamilton September 21, 2013 at 9:21 AM hi Joseph and ty so much Shadow x smile

Dr.Ram Mehta September 21, 2013 at 7:12 AM Congrats for the win in my contest, nice rhymings and thoughts, Shadow Shadow Hamilton September 21, 2013 at 8:24 AM It was nice to take part Dr Ram ty for placing me and for running contest Shadow x smiles

Joseph May September 14, 2013 at 9:25 AM very nicely penned Shadow...best wishes Shadow Hamilton September 14, 2013 at 1:15 PM hi Joseph ty so much gl to you too Shadow x smile

Richard Lamoureux September 5, 2013 at 5:26 PM I do agree when in balance it can be an earth moving experience. Shadow Hamilton September 5, 2013 at 5:56 PM oh boy Richard it sure can be lol. Ty for reading Shadow x smile

Andrea Dietrich September 3, 2013 at 11:53 PM gosh what a COOL concept: a combination of patience WITH passion. Usually people only have one or the other and together what a FORCE. Richard Lamoureux September 5, 2013 at 5:25 PM After an hour passion takes over*lol* sometimes 15 minutes. ;0) Shadow Hamilton September 4, 2013 at 4:38 PM hi Andrea in some cultures they believe the most intense sexual encounters are those that combine patience and passion and will spend two or more hours in stimulation before joining together. A force indeed lol ty for reading Shadow x smile

Harry Horsman September 3, 2013 at 10:40 AM love your philosophy here Shadow, in fact love your poem..... Shadow Hamilton September 4, 2013 at 4:33 PM so kind of you Harry ty for taking the time to read Shadow x smile

Dr.Ram Mehta September 2, 2013 at 9:16 PM Thanks for the entry, Shadow Shadow Hamilton September 4, 2013 at 4:32 PM very welcome Dr Ram a fun contest Shadow x smile