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Passion Pays, Not Patience

Of all that is free in life there's one that stands out passion without any strife that's what it's all about Take patience and passion and mix the two together until they part in fission neither now the aggressor In total harmony they meet patience adding temperance for'bearingly giving us mete now loving without hinderance written 09/03/2013 contest Passion Pays, Not Patience

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Date: 6/21/2014 9:39:00 PM
Shadow A nice write that combines two elements of life we all need. Nice job Thank you for the great comment on my I Did It My Way poem.
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Date: 9/23/2013 1:04:00 AM
Many congrats Shadow ...Seren
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Date: 9/23/2013 12:53:00 AM
Shadow many Congratulations ....Seren
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Date: 9/22/2013 9:21:00 PM
I am so glad to see this poem on the winners list. One of my personal favorites.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/23/2013 2:22:00 PM
Hi Richard I am glad you like it so much Ty Shadow x smile
Date: 9/22/2013 8:40:00 PM
lovely win...Shadow... Linda
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/23/2013 2:22:00 PM
ty Linda appreciated Shadow x smile
Date: 9/22/2013 6:46:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!!Sara
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/23/2013 2:23:00 PM
ty Sara so happy you enjoyed it Shadow x smile
Date: 9/21/2013 2:05:00 PM
Hello Shadow, good read here and many good wishes for the furure..'
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/22/2013 5:19:00 AM
Hi Joe Ty for your inspiring review Shadow x smile
Date: 9/21/2013 9:05:00 AM
You have woven the two so beautifully, Shadow !! Congrats on your winning poem!!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/21/2013 9:24:00 AM
Carrie Ty dear lady you always inspire Shadow x smile
Date: 9/21/2013 8:46:00 AM
I like how you combined passion and patience, together, as if one...great write, congrats on your win :)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/21/2013 9:23:00 AM
Hi Sandra and Ty separately they work together they an inferno lol Shadow x smile
Date: 9/21/2013 8:25:00 AM
congrats on your win Shadow
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/21/2013 9:21:00 AM
hi Joseph and ty so much Shadow x smile
Date: 9/21/2013 7:12:00 AM
Congrats for the win in my contest, nice rhymings and thoughts, Shadow
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/21/2013 8:24:00 AM
It was nice to take part Dr Ram ty for placing me and for running contest Shadow x smiles
Date: 9/14/2013 9:25:00 AM
very nicely penned Shadow...best wishes
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/14/2013 1:15:00 PM
hi Joseph ty so much gl to you too Shadow x smile
Date: 9/5/2013 5:26:00 PM
I do agree when in balance it can be an earth moving experience.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/5/2013 5:56:00 PM
oh boy Richard it sure can be lol. Ty for reading Shadow x smile
Date: 9/3/2013 11:53:00 PM
gosh what a COOL concept: a combination of patience WITH passion. Usually people only have one or the other and together what a FORCE.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/5/2013 5:25:00 PM
After an hour passion takes over*lol* sometimes 15 minutes. ;0)
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/4/2013 4:38:00 PM
hi Andrea in some cultures they believe the most intense sexual encounters are those that combine patience and passion and will spend two or more hours in stimulation before joining together. A force indeed lol ty for reading Shadow x smile
Date: 9/3/2013 10:40:00 AM
love your philosophy here Shadow, in fact love your poem.....
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/4/2013 4:33:00 PM
so kind of you Harry ty for taking the time to read Shadow x smile
Date: 9/2/2013 9:16:00 PM
Thanks for the entry, Shadow
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/4/2013 4:32:00 PM
very welcome Dr Ram a fun contest Shadow x smile