passion painted at sunrise


inked in bright colours on the tapestry of my mind
a rainbow takes its light from the luminous rain

amber sun rays reflect condensation of thoughts
purple emotions flood third eyes at new dawn

a swallow teases visions of peace embroidered
in the cinnamon canvas of scrumptious delight

the soft touch of your vibrant imagination
sends heatwaves into thunderous awakening

we become a crescendo as tantra enters our spirit
the palette tickles lips and tingles the gloss of our kiss

days become ballets in hues of exuberant love
darkness recedes as we follow spirit karma and love
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Date: 6/25/2025 8:28:00 AM
Hello Kai, Your poem is a sensuous brushstroke of sunrise and spirit. It celebrates love as both palette and prayer—vivid, tender, and soul-deep :)
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Date: 4/21/2025 7:30:00 AM
Love these sweet thoughts of yours. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/19/2025 9:55:00 AM
Dear Kai, the rich imageries and vibrant metaphors employed in "passion painted at sunrise" are strikingly beautiful. I adore "a rainbow takes its light from the luminous rain" but truly every couplet employs sensory and sensual beauty to entrance and seduce one's imagination to dance "ballets in hues of exuberant love". Simply splendid! Your impassioned poetic artistry shines! Warmest wishes my poet friend.. ~Susan
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 4/19/2025 11:24:00 AM
Thank you so much. I often write about depression and addiction to get it out of my system. Today I simply wanted to share the beauty of being alive. XXX
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