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                                          March 19, 2021
                         Inspired by  "My Obsession" Poetry Contest 
                                    Sponsor: Regina Mcintosh
                                            Placed Second

Passion Or Obsession

It was insanely challenging to arrive there, realities hindered me 
from grabbing a marvellous opportunity! 
but after I took a glance at the breathtaking artwork - 
I was awestruck! this is unique beyond imagination!
there was no turning back! I was obsessed!

Problems were endless..
a new foreign country with rigid rules,
culture unfamiliar, language insufficient, restricted movement,
and most importantly - insurmountable concern about safety..

But I was undaunted!
a rare art which has come down for hundreds of years - so delicate and intricate!
there was no question of giving up...
even if I had to overcome innumerable  hurdles!

What are those hurdles compared to what will shine like scintillating stars as my treasure forever? 
and perhaps will be an unforgettable legacy for my family for generations! 
Those exquisite beauties are tiny, but they are marvels!
Searched frantically for paints, beads, crystals, laces everywhere! 
My passionate self ignored all obstacles for days and months, 
(with butterflies in my stomach).

At last...my unwavering persistence rewarded me with unparalleled results....
defying all odds, I created an array of rare artwork -
my pride, my passion ~ the showcase of my obsession!
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Stathakis Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 3:17 PM
Love your poem. Congratulations!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 3:24 PM
Thank you so much. I am so glad you liked the poem. Appreciate your kind comments. BW ~ Mala
Ligon Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 8:01 AM
I've seen this artwork at the fair and there is a lot of detail that goes into it. Those examples in your video are so elegant. Thanks for sharing your passion.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and watching the video. I agree, it is a rare art which includes a lot of details. My poem narrates the obstacles I had to go through. BW ~ Mala
Mcintosh Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 7:32 AM
This is a gem. Congrats on your top placement. God bless you always with love, Gina
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 9:30 AM
Thanks, Regina. Appreciate your kindness. BW ~ Mala
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 12:23 PM
Hello Mala, oh you must be proud of your art work being on display. Love Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 3:15 PM
Hello Mala, you had a chance to learn this art form and you did it. It is beautifully done. Love Darlene.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 2:55 PM
Dear Darlene, Yes, I am proud to have learned a rare art..even though the circumstances were not very favourable! Thanks for stopping by ~ Mala
Hankins Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 7:49 PM
It would be interesting to know the full story behind your obsession, Malabika. I am making an assumption your piece is based on your personal experience...maybe not? Anyway, it's a very interesting poem.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 8:07 PM
Yes, Milton, this is my personal experience from when we lived in the Middle East for a while. Did you watch the video I attached? If you do, you will have some idea about the art. Thank you very much for reading my poem. I read yours - actually books are my first obsession.
Brul Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 6:48 PM
Such a great write! This obsession of yours takes me to another sphere of my artistic journey. Thank you for the inspiration. Best wishes..
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 19, 2021 at 6:51 PM
Thank you so much for reading and commenting with your inspiring words. You are an artist yourself! You understand very well how obsessed/passionate we are! Love ~ Mala
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