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Passion Nature Can'T Deplete

Clouds grew dark and ominous needing to release their tears Thunder sounds its dominance bringing everyone but us fear Our fantasy lives in the downpour Mingling wetness intent to excite Touching silky flesh as we explore Intense fire in the rain you ignite In the heat of our pleasure blending A sweet mashup serendipitous fling Refreshing downpour never ending Enchanting love melody bodies sing Impassioned whirlwind love's norm Twisting limbs bliss in a lover's feat More breathtaking then the storm Our passion nature can't deplete

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Sandra Adams

Date: 8/30/2019 10:20:00 AM

i always love a good storm but never looked at them in such a sensual way... wonderful poem!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/30/2019 11:40:00 AM

I really love the rain hahaha! As if you couldn't tell!;) but thank you so much!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/29/2019 7:03:00 PM

Wow, Brenda. I'll never look at thunderstorms quite the same again. Such passion in your pen!! :) gw

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/29/2019 7:10:00 PM

Gershon thank you! Lol I always view a thunderstorm as so! Maybe it's just me but I do love a good storm!;)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 8/29/2019 3:41:00 PM

Lovely penning Brenda, such great imagery and passionate embrace. Miss your pic, Blessings, Gordon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/29/2019 7:09:00 PM

Lol thx Gordon! Well I am showing off my grandbaby!;) But I am only leaving it up for so long my daughter doesn't want her pic up so actually thx I do need to remove it!;)

Chris Green

Date: 8/29/2019 1:30:00 PM

A beautifully sensual and alluring poem of love in the rain. Really nice.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 8/29/2019 1:57:00 PM

Thx so much chris! ;)