Passion

I felt someone stare into my eyes
I heard voices very faint, very distant
They said I was lost
They said I was gone
But oh my great passion!
I knew exactly where I was
I had become my passion
The feeling of endless search had left me

I don’t know what they did with that old body of mine
But my new one was walking immense,
In and beside my passion
Finally! The hot tears were gone
The longing was gone

They said I was lost
They said I was gone
But I knew where I was…
And forever would be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ashley Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 8:18 PM
Wow! Chris what a deeply spiritual and compelling poem this is. Your heartfelt message is absolute and beautiful. An inspired and an inspirational write that I read with relish. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
Hagy Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 8:55 PM
Thanks so much for the visit and your warm words of encouragement Susan :) Have a great day C.H.
Vinson Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 1:31 PM
Chris, when do we so stride in our lives? : ) I guess some of us never do.
Hagy Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 6:47 PM
Thanks for visiting Doug...this is just a piece I pulled out of my closet from younger years of yearning. But now more than ever I await the beyond:)
Callus Avatar
April 1, 2017 at 7:44 AM
This is passionately expressive, Chris! Knowing without doubt where and who you are must come with an invigorating and encouraging feeling. Sounds like you are in the seventh heaven:) ~ Regards // paul
Hagy Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 6:43 PM
Thanks for the kind words Paul... I not sure where seventh heaven is, but I know there is at least one haha! It is empowering to have no doubts:) have great week.
Marie Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 5:13 PM
The spirituality of your words are profound and enlightening. To be at one with self is not easily achieved with the journey to 'knowing' often rife with roadblocks and detours. The last two lines feel so peaceful. An inspiring write Chis :-) blessings xxx enjoy a lovely weekend :-)
Hagy Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 6:37 PM
Thanks Lynn, your words are always so encouraging:) I am what some call a "broken soul", but God has gifted me with dreams that are more than dreams and they have eradicated all my doubt! Have a great week:)
Capitano Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 4:02 PM
Way to hang in there Chris. Good one.
Hagy Avatar
April 2, 2017 at 6:32 PM
Thanks for visiting Phil:) and for the sweet comment...have a great week:)
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