Lori Lucas Mcclure Poet Monoku

Passion

wild hearts beneath a lover's moon in naked truth and splendor of want 





             by Lori McClure  9/7/11
             for contest:  Constance La France ~ A Rambling Poet ~  
             Write it in one line, Please

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Andrea Dietrich November 17, 2011 at 9:52 PM very romantic, and I take it you won? a very belated congrats then!

Elizabeth Wesley September 19, 2011 at 9:18 PM How can you say so much in only one line? Romantic for sure.

Dan Kearley September 15, 2011 at 7:55 PM Oh yes!! Very nice! :-)

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 10:40 AM I would like to take this time to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. I would also like to let you know I always enjoy reading your wonderful poetry Lori. Love, Carol

Lee Ramage September 11, 2011 at 12:20 AM Oh yeah, great write! well done and congratulations on your win. Lee

Charlotte Puddifoot September 10, 2011 at 7:20 PM congrats on your contest win with this beautiful monoku, passionate indeed :-)

Caryl Ramsdale September 10, 2011 at 5:02 PM Placement congratulations for your win in the "Write it in one line, Please" contest. CR

Kash Poet September 10, 2011 at 1:21 PM This is really breathtaking Lori as Linda has mentioned...congrats on your win. Lori Lucas Mcclure September 10, 2011 at 2:18 PM Thank you for your kind comments. greatly appreciated-----Lori

Jack Horne September 10, 2011 at 10:57 AM Many congrats for all your wins, Lori : ) Lori Lucas Mcclure September 10, 2011 at 2:27 PM Thank you for your comment!!-----Lori

Carol Sunshine Brown September 10, 2011 at 8:22 AM Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Write It In On Line, Please" contest. A very well deserved placement Lori. Love, Carol Lori Lucas Mcclure September 10, 2011 at 2:28 PM Thank you Carol for your kind comments!---Lori

Dr.Ram Mehta September 10, 2011 at 3:20 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of Constance,Lori Lori Lucas Mcclure September 10, 2011 at 2:28 PM Thank you for your comments!---Lori

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 10, 2011 at 12:11 AM CONGRATS LORI ON ANOTHER WINNING POEM WITH THIS BREATHTAKING MONOKU LUV.. PASSION..A FAV SUBJECT OF MINE ..OH.. Lori Lucas Mcclure September 10, 2011 at 2:29 PM Thank you for your kind comments Linda!!--Lori

Constance La France September 9, 2011 at 10:43 AM soupmail

Carol Sunshine Brown September 8, 2011 at 2:53 PM I enjoyed reading your poetry today Lori. Love, Carol

David Williams September 8, 2011 at 6:35 AM Lori, extremely romantic, best of luck..David

Jack Ross Jr. September 7, 2011 at 9:54 PM Wonderful romantic write lovely Lady Lori enjoyed....with love....old Jack

Elizabeth Wesley September 7, 2011 at 9:13 PM Describes perfectly what it is all about Lori. Lori Lucas Mcclure September 10, 2011 at 2:30 PM Thank you for you kind comments!----Lori