Passion

This is excellent. I like the flow of the words and the message. Passion has a lot of lessons embedded therein. Great job! ~ Joseph

Brilliant darling! As you are...a gem a diamond and a sapphire shining so brightly in this world and here at the soupie! The SHHHHOUPIE~! ;> he he he he I loved this!~ It's neat to see others put together a cinquain because there are so few words and it allows the reader to see how deep the poet can take them into their world~ You are a poetress of the times baby doll! LOVED in every corner at the shhhoupie~! Muah~ xxoxoxoxo :) ciao for now love bug~jane

Very passionate write, my dear you are full of that today! Well written cinquain! Kristin XO

Wow. Love this one. Lots of passion in the air. Good for you! : ) Love, Shar

such a few words that truly hits the target on the head, thank you for your welcome comments, take care D-nyce

There is a lot of depth to this concise format. Nice use of this format. The strong ending leaves the reader with something to think about. I enjoy writers that can make the most of a few words. You have accomplished that in this poem. Nice job! Thank you for your kind words regarding my poetry. Karen