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Passing Regret

Dead winds blow through the Old oak parlor door at night Silently she screams No one to hear her Stifled, but desperate cry She waits, hopes, and dreams A sin, she's told to Want for anything more than Rough stone, wood and brass Resolved, she watches The sun die, to rise again Through the old stained glass Trapped in unselfish And eternal devotion Both, the cage and key Lingering in what Well might or might not have been Dreams are hard to see Vows uttered to God With well meaning intention The velvet-lined snare She, with rosary Held tight in her trembling hands Buries all in prayer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/31/2014 1:29:00 PM
Alright, You can stop writing so many good poems. At least let some of us write a good one or maybe two......Roger
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Date: 1/22/2014 4:13:00 PM
Wow! Excellent capture of a pious woman's dilemma. Devotion to morality as taught by various religions can indeed be two a edged sword. Once side to keep away tempting suitors and the other too comfort the mortal pangs of passionless loneliness. Wise write.
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Date: 1/22/2014 9:01:00 AM
How Rude, where are my manners.... About your poem: ---- WOW! I visioned a very deep imagery, of her relying and holding on to her faith through the grace of God. How she prays the prayers in which are known to save a soul..... Chris, WOW! `WHAT A POEM..... Impressed.... Hope all is well. Chris, SKAT also has a Facebook. LOL, under her real name Sidney LeeAnn.... Does your brother Roger, have a Facebook? Just wondering:)... Linda
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Date: 1/22/2014 9:59:00 AM
Thanks for the WOW, Linda. Roger does not as yet... to my knowledge, have a fb account. You'd have to talk with him about that one. He lives in Michigan and I in Florida so you probably speak or write with him as much as I do. I will fb request you and your beautiful sister today.
Date: 1/22/2014 8:54:00 AM
Good morning Chris, I'm here to answer your question,.. About the question... I have a Facebook. If you go to my poem list, and look on the side where it reads "MY WALL" <--- that is my Facebook wall connected to the soup... Stop by and drop a hello, Nice, seeing you again on the soup..... LINDA
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