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my life isn't over as far as i know there's no enemy chasing me or disease that have shown as far as i know i have another fifty years to march through life and many more tears i have a wisdom that comes with time i have a learning that taught me to rhyme one of the tricks i play with words a game i play with other boys and girls i play with emotion when it's my turn sometimes i play fairly or so i have learned it's time to pass on what i have been given help the younger understand their living for some there is worship a type of praise and others a picture in which they gaze periods of life or particular days some described clearly others in a haze love our chosen vanity filled many a page never ending are our stories but there are only two plays i the same actor played a few leading parts modern, Shakespearean, and musical art comedies and tragedies are the stuff of life yet only once was i given that thing i called a wife but deep runs the river that flows through time heading for an ocean where it is no more when it's time to go through it we don't knock at the door the game is over, time to tally the score with words our written testimonies telling the deeds of souls and hearts some with solemnity and some with art asking unanswerable questions seeking something in the dark giving unacceptable explanations for that which was torn apart we love god, we love each other but we mostly love ourselves our hurt that we share with others our pen at paper yells our preaching and our pleading pretending to be spells repeated down through history after every love there is a hell whether warning, prophecy or story we cannot help but tell those wondrous things that befell us while in heaven before we fell our writing is not for fame or fortune we don't care if it sells but it's our turn at ringing the same old emotional bell (Dedicated to the memory of Linda-Marie the Sweet heart. )

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/6/2014 8:54:00 AM
It's a lovely dedication to our sweetest Linda Marie! and Congrats on your win in this contest, "Impress Me!" and thank you John for visiting my poem and leaving your kind remarks, gautami
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Date: 2/5/2014 3:03:00 PM
Good write. I will provide you a rating. I like the scheme. Dropped but a good go at voice. 5 Verlena
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/5/2014 4:48:00 PM
John, I really like your poem... Oblivion Dark Sunshine
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Verlena S. Walker
Date: 2/5/2014 4:45:00 PM
Why? You rated first...
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John Loving Iii
Date: 2/5/2014 4:22:00 PM
i wouldn't expect any higher from you.
Date: 2/5/2014 8:50:00 AM
This is an emotional write my friend...heart-felt indeed!!
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Date: 2/5/2014 4:40:00 AM
this is lovely john,,so gracious is your sentiment, and sincere your poetry....
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Date: 2/5/2014 12:13:00 AM
IT impressed me too and congrats on the win, john
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Date: 2/4/2014 4:01:00 PM
Beautiful tribute, John. Thanks for expressing it! She was a lovely person, sweet and kind...Wonderful one!!
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Date: 2/4/2014 3:16:00 PM
beautiful dedication.
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Date: 2/4/2014 9:11:00 AM
My dear John, A beautiful tribute! A stellar write! Was Linda from Iowa? 7+ In admiration, chuck
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Date: 2/1/2014 5:33:00 PM
Great one honoring Linda-Marie..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Date: 2/1/2014 12:05:00 PM
john, this is stunning. Masterpiece indeed and wonderful dedication
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Date: 2/1/2014 7:10:00 AM
Wow !! Powerful dedication poem !! You've touched on so many levels of poetry and the writer and brought it all into living. Well done !!
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Date: 1/31/2014 8:43:00 PM
A poetical masterpiece.
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Date: 1/31/2014 4:10:00 PM
I enjoyed this walk through your experiences and your ideas about life and what poetry is a reflection of....especially the powerful ending! :) Thanks for passing poetry along....we love ourselves....and at times we don't, but those emotions must be told. :)
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Date: 1/31/2014 5:22:00 AM
wise words John! When we have accomplished and learnt much in life, it's good to pass on the information to younger generations and perhaps they can learn something from our experiences. Well penned!
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Date: 1/30/2014 11:10:00 PM
This one I can relate to in some ways! Ahhh, life!!! Loved the line about the river.
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