Passing Parade

One of the entries:
Scattered showers passing through
rains on our parade.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mcgovern Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 11:39 AM
Outstanding, your clever us of the ain as one of the enteries is precious. I love a good parade. Mac
Freeman Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 11:19 AM
Rain drops falling on my head, that don't mean my parade is dead! This Haiku expresses you Sue. Sincerely, Love, Moses
Dietrich Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 1:48 PM
this is very cute playing on the " don't rain on my parade" expression. Keep the poems coming!! LUv, Andrea
George   Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 12:23 PM
Yep! but not for long. BRAVO!!! Nothin's goin' rain on my parade. Love ya girl. Lainie
Orozco Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 9:59 AM
beautiful! -edward
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