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Passing Out

This injured head appears to pose some simple questions. Is this head what gave rise to the fall to the floor? Did the fall give rise to the pills? Did the pills give rise to the cure that gave rise to my thanks to the fall to the floor that sent me questioning? A head asks questions of itself. (Nov 2021)

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Date: 12/18/2021 6:46:00 AM
Hello Andrew, I enjoyed this jar within a jar quandry regarding an injury + cure. Very original + imaginative poem. Hope that you are well. Thanks to your fine piece, I now need to take my neglected pills. Cheers, Brian
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Andrew John
Date: 12/20/2021 2:13:00 AM
Thanks, Brian. Yes, I did indeed have a fall off a library stool, visit to a hospital, some magic pills.

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