Passing Moment

Fiery flames of leaves light up this mountain. 
Brilliant oranges and reds nurture my heart.
I watch another snake down toward me
Wonder if this driver is also in awe of God’s work.

Almost wave as he starts past me.
But that would be silly, right?
He waves, but is gone 
Before I can give an answering wave

Two travelers, one going north,
The other going south,
Passing on God’s prettiest mountain
In October. What could be finer than that?

Will he tell his wife and children about this place?
Would they be able to picture it?
Could I capture a photo while I drive?
God smiles at my thoughts, more here than ever before.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Rigoler Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 7:30 AM
No spectacular leafage this year, Caren, thanks to the drought. Had our first snow already! Not looking forward to winter. I enjoyed this poem, especially the first stanza. Thank you for the stop by. / Maurice
Krutsinger Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 3:45 PM
I am so sad for you guys.
Asuncion Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 1:10 AM
A well penned poem. Truly splendid. Perfect score of 10. Please read my poem CONTAIN ATROCIOUS RISK. Thanks.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 3:38 PM
Thank you Bernard
Crabtree Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 5:02 PM
The leaves on the mountains are beautiful this time of year.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 30, 2020 at 8:19 AM
They are gorgeous here, and raining now.
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