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Passing Moment

Fiery flames of leaves light up this mountain. Brilliant oranges and reds nurture my heart. I watch another snake down toward me Wonder if this driver is also in awe of God’s work. Almost wave as he starts past me. But that would be silly, right? He waves, but is gone Before I can give an answering wave Two travelers, one going north, The other going south, Passing on God’s prettiest mountain In October. What could be finer than that? Will he tell his wife and children about this place? Would they be able to picture it? Could I capture a photo while I drive? God smiles at my thoughts, more here than ever before.

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Date: 11/1/2020 7:30:00 AM
No spectacular leafage this year, Caren, thanks to the drought. Had our first snow already! Not looking forward to winter. I enjoyed this poem, especially the first stanza. Thank you for the stop by. / Maurice
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 11/1/2020 3:45:00 PM
I am so sad for you guys.
Date: 10/31/2020 1:10:00 AM
A well penned poem. Truly splendid. Perfect score of 10. Please read my poem CONTAIN ATROCIOUS RISK. Thanks.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/31/2020 3:38:00 PM
Thank you Bernard
Date: 10/29/2020 5:02:00 PM
The leaves on the mountains are beautiful this time of year.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/30/2020 8:19:00 AM
They are gorgeous here, and raining now.

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