Passing Fate

knocking at my door 
emerald eyes raven hair 
This man touches my mind
He turns the path i am on 
I can not stop the pulsing of my heart
The wanting the thoughts 
Ribbons of emotion
Tired to my soul

His voice captured me 
His words take me to a place once before
I try to stop but there is no stop
This man was a memory of long time ago 
A story once told off a fortune ball
Destiny rides high it is with him by my side
As eagles fly may this heart never die
Such intensity explodes in time 
A gasp over mine 
As my emotion cries

My body becomes weak 
my skin softened
A touch a need almost to feed 
i cant not say where this will lead 
I feel like i have been freed 
My gate unlocked to this passing fate 
From this moment my heart is at stake 
Of this passing fate
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 3:13 PM
Sarah, mega congrats for having your poem featured on the home page >> James
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June 23, 2010 at 8:09 AM
This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~
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June 21, 2010 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sarah. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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June 4, 2010 at 11:44 PM
Nice work with all your usual passion.Love Roger x
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May 30, 2010 at 6:50 AM
Go ahead and melt like butter girl. I just love it! Great job and keep writing. Joseph
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May 30, 2010 at 4:19 AM
Lovely piece of poetry Sarah, a joy to read this Sunday >> James
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May 28, 2010 at 11:20 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us Sarah. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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May 27, 2010 at 11:03 PM
Thank you Dr Ram ,Poet Destroyer and Jodie glad you like this . sarah x
Mehta Avatar
May 27, 2010 at 8:49 PM
A wonderful write. I enjoyed it
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May 27, 2010 at 4:39 PM
what a sweet write, enjoyed
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May 27, 2010 at 4:00 PM
captured true feelings...
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