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Passing Fate

knocking at my door emerald eyes raven hair This man touches my mind He turns the path i am on I can not stop the pulsing of my heart The wanting the thoughts Ribbons of emotion Tired to my soul His voice captured me His words take me to a place once before I try to stop but there is no stop This man was a memory of long time ago A story once told off a fortune ball Destiny rides high it is with him by my side As eagles fly may this heart never die Such intensity explodes in time A gasp over mine As my emotion cries My body becomes weak my skin softened A touch a need almost to feed i cant not say where this will lead I feel like i have been freed My gate unlocked to this passing fate From this moment my heart is at stake Of this passing fate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/23/2010 3:13:00 PM
Sarah, mega congrats for having your poem featured on the home page >> James
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Date: 6/23/2010 8:09:00 AM
This is a wonderful piece! Accept my colorful congrats on having this poem featured this week. You are such a nice poet! Please, keep your poetry pens dancing on your poetry pad. I wish you all the best with your writing. Love ~Adeleke~
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Date: 6/21/2010 8:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Sarah. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/4/2010 11:44:00 PM
Nice work with all your usual passion.Love Roger x
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Date: 5/30/2010 6:50:00 AM
Go ahead and melt like butter girl. I just love it! Great job and keep writing. Joseph
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Date: 5/30/2010 4:19:00 AM
Lovely piece of poetry Sarah, a joy to read this Sunday >> James
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Date: 5/28/2010 11:20:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry and I thank you for sharing it with us Sarah. Have a wonderful weekend filled with good health love and loads of inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/27/2010 11:03:00 PM
Thank you Dr Ram ,Poet Destroyer and Jodie glad you like this . sarah x
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Date: 5/27/2010 8:49:00 PM
A wonderful write. I enjoyed it
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Date: 5/27/2010 4:39:00 PM
what a sweet write, enjoyed
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Date: 5/27/2010 4:00:00 PM
captured true feelings...
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