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Passing a Note

Dear Jack, I am the one you pass in the hall. Shy and quiet With glasses and pony tails. Never having enough courage to talk to you Always hanging out with your friends after school Figure this was the best way to ask.. I stuffed a note in your locker door. as I walked on pass. I know we don't know each other well You are a senior ready to get out. I am a freshman just starting out. But what do you say lets give it a chance. We can start off as just friends. Cory Long Michael's passing a note contest

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Date: 6/11/2012 6:52:00 AM
ok I read your note,link up basket ball court at 2,lol,nice write,wish you the best
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:24:00 AM
this is really really sweet. I love how you did your entry, Cory. and Jack is REALLY great!!! I might have passed him a note too back in those old school days!!
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Date: 4/5/2012 10:10:00 AM
oh so sweet and pure cory.. cute and innocent love note.. good luck in contest.. youth is so incredible luv..
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Date: 4/4/2012 12:24:00 PM
cute one Cory! love,Deb
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