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Written on October 1, 2023
Terza Rima Sonnet

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Passage of Praise

Persuading October from her quiet lair Shedding the pleasures of life’s fictional realms Mouthwatering plunder, gathering to share Swirling through the silence, round oaks, pines and elms Secrets and shadows reflecting nature’s rush Flames of ginger, shushing dark who overwhelms Sweet dreams are splattered with hope by God’s paintbrush Storm wrecking peace calms souls who reflect this time Much like a coryphée, plied by a wood thrush Closing those moments by the sea, maritime Breathing in crisp air, whispering a prayer Carrot colored leaves twirl in a soothing rhyme Reflections so daring arrive on sun’s glare Lifting the past’s tears with grace beyond compare
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Goldsmith Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 10:37 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/story/picture. I have said many times, God has a pretty paintbrush to paint the world with. Have a blessed day.....................
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October 9, 2023 at 1:12 PM
You do this form so well.. flows and rhymes so well and the imagery as always is excellent..Thank you for writing and congratulations on your placement..
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October 5, 2023 at 11:52 AM
Beautiful poem, Gina! Just dancing to the enchanting magic of fall in all its natural beauty. Enjoyed te read! Autum is my very favorite season of the year.God bless you dear friend! D.
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