Pass It Please

"Please pass the chicken", Daddy said.
I watched the platter pass with dread
As each big brother took his choice
Would there be only wings for Joyce?

It was so hard to sit and wait.
Daddy took two legs on his plate.
I felt the dreaded tear drops start.
He knew that was my favorite part.

My brother Charley liked the feet,
The part that no one else would eat.
Mama's favorite was the breast
But I liked the big drumsticks best.

As the smallest I was always last
To hold the platter as it passed.
Now all my favorites were gone.
I turned away as it passed on.

As I let the necks and wings go by,
My daddy with twinkle in his eye
Said "Here's yours, Joybell, I took two,
But saved the biggest leg for you."

I know it now if I were able
To have those dears ones at my table,
I'd pass them all the legs and thighs.
And declare the wings were just my size.  

For Paula's  "Pass " contest  won 9th in contest
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Brown Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 4:50 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Paula Swanson's contest "Pass". Love, Carol
Haick Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 1:12 PM
Hey Joyce, Hope you're doing well. Congratulations on your worthy win in Paula's Contest.. Enjoy your win! Love, Audrey
Gorelick Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 7:51 AM
congrats on your chicken poem...love it. BG
Mehta Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 5:18 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 4:59 AM
Congrats Joyce on your win in the Pass contest.. enjoy this super Sunday with luv..
Henderson Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 1:57 PM
I remember those days. It was hard for mom to fill up four growing boys. Charles
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September 25, 2010 at 7:10 AM
Smiles, Joyce. The wings are my favorites! And I do remember passing the plate around each Sunday (that was chicken day at our house). But it was my older brother who received the platter last. Whatever was left, he would simply dump onto his plate. And the human garbage disposal never wasted one bit of it. We loved teasing him about it, though. You brought back wonderful memories for me and now I'm more determined than ever to rejoin my family in NJ. How I miss those days. Love, CD
Mehta Avatar
September 25, 2010 at 6:39 AM
very unique write with nice theme you have chosen, Joyce
K. Avatar
September 24, 2010 at 10:10 PM
Aww you sure got the sweetest daddy, Joyce-- this was definitely heartwarming! Enjoyed your take on the challenge made me smile ^_^ btw, in L2S6, I think there's a sneaky word there-- "the"-- hope this helps-- wish you the bets in the contest :)-- nikko :)
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September 24, 2010 at 6:16 PM
Very enjoyable write, and got me a little hungry...always Michael
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