Pass It Foward

Having guided a young man through a tough time in life
It came time for him to move on;
Before he left he shook my hand, and said:
“I want to thank you for helping me along.”

“But how can I possibly give back to you
All the things that you have given to me?
How can I ever come close to repaying you;
It seems to be an impossibility."

I looked him straight in the eyes and said;
"Son, it’s your future I am looking toward,
The best way for paying me back
Is to pass my help along forward.

Take the things you learned from me
And pass them to your friends.
Take the love that I gave you
And pass it on once again.

Pass the encouragement,
Pass the support,
Take all the trust
And pass it on forth.

Never forget that you can’t give back,
But you can always pass things ahead,
And that way, the gifts I gave you
Will live on way after I’m dead.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/8/2010 7:20:00 PM
By far the best entry. Congratulations on taking first place.
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Date: 10/6/2010 6:01:00 AM
congrats on your big win well deserved faleshia
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st Place win Joe in Paula Swanson's contest "Pass". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 12:43:00 PM
Congrats on your !st plac win!!! well done my friend
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Date: 10/3/2010 11:28:00 AM
What a joy it is to read your very inspiring verse, Joe! I needed a dose of this...Thank you. Hope all are well. God bless. Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 10/3/2010 7:55:00 AM
An honor to read this...and share this place in the contest, Joe. I think we both had a "moral to the story" we wanted to tell with this one....I'm so glad it was an opportunity to share kindred feelings! Congratulations to one of my favs!!! :) An awesome poem!
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Date: 10/3/2010 7:40:00 AM
Good job Joe..wonderful concept and wonderful poem.. congrats on your 1st place. BG
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Date: 10/3/2010 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Joe
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Date: 10/3/2010 4:47:00 AM
Congrats Joe on your first place win .. enjoy on a super Sunday with luv..
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Date: 9/25/2010 8:47:00 AM
Joe, I'm glad you posted this one here as well as on Facebook. I'm sure the title was inspired by the movie "Pay it Forward," one of my all-time faves. If we as a society could only learn to follow these precepts, our world would be so much more pleasant. Soup mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/24/2010 7:57:00 PM
A beauty, Joe! Truly heartfelt, inspiring and serves as a reminder to help as much as we can, each other..love is all that's required of us... Goes to my favs. Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/24/2010 2:21:00 PM
This is a lovely message, and reminds me of the movie.."Pay it Forward"... there is a lesson to be learned from such a philosophy...if only we could always keep it in the forefront of our daily lives.
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Date: 9/23/2010 9:50:00 PM
oh Joe I love it, it's going into my favourites
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