Theresa Stephens Poet Rhyme

Party Was a Smash

Fleeting bright orbs appear on camera phone
Gasps of surprise within party zone

Prompted one more photo flash
Scared few made a dash

Hearing vase

Smash!

Lampshade sways

Apparent loud crash
Discover on arm, red gash

Seeming from ceiling an object thrown
Fleeting bright orbs appear on camera phone


Suggested type: numero uno

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Skat A February 27, 2015 at 10:47 PM Theresa, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~ Theresa Stephens March 8, 2015 at 1:13 PM So kind of you to read and for your lovely comments, thank you xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma February 24, 2015 at 1:10 AM Lovely write Theresa,, congrats on big win! Theresa Stephens March 8, 2015 at 1:14 PM So pleased to receive your very generous comments, thank you. xx

Richard Lamoureux February 23, 2015 at 8:25 AM This is cool! Congrats. Theresa Stephens March 8, 2015 at 1:15 PM Glad to read you enjoyed reading it and thank you for your congrats.xx

Casarah Nance February 23, 2015 at 7:50 AM Ha, sounds like a good party, nicely done on the new form! Unique take and fun too, grats on your win Theresa Stephens March 8, 2015 at 1:17 PM I welcome your visiting and for your very helpful kind comments xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty February 23, 2015 at 7:41 AM CONGRATULATIONS THERESA ON WIN. LOVEWYT Theresa Stephens March 8, 2015 at 1:19 PM Thank you so much for reading and for your kind congrats xx

Jan Allison February 23, 2015 at 2:18 AM loved your take on the form - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx Theresa Stephens March 8, 2015 at 1:28 PM Thank you Jan, so pleased you enjoyed reading it. Hugs Theresa xx

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2015 at 1:02 AM Theresa. your poem stood out as one of the most unique of the bunch. A very entertaining one!!! Great middle word and fun rhymes. Also i enjoyed your creative name for my form. congrats on your win. (hope you will change the word appears for appear. Except for that, your poem is nearly perfect) Theresa Stephens March 8, 2015 at 1:33 PM Thank you Andrea, it was an interesting challenge, which I enjoyed attempting! I have taken your advice after rereading and "appear" it shall be. All the best, Theresa xx

Poesy Relish February 10, 2015 at 1:59 AM Osum pen... liked your take on the topic teresa.. lov, nad!.. 7 Theresa Stephens March 8, 2015 at 1:34 PM Good of you to visit and thank you for commenting. xx