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Party Was a Smash

Fleeting bright orbs appear on camera phone
Gasps of surprise within party zone

Prompted one more photo flash
Scared few made a dash

Hearing vase

Smash!

Lampshade sways

Apparent loud crash
Discover on arm, red gash

Seeming from ceiling an object thrown
Fleeting bright orbs appear on camera phone


Suggested type: numero uno

Copyright © Theresa Stephens | Year Posted 2015

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Skat A Date: 2/27/2015 10:47:00 PM Theresa, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~ Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 3/8/2015 1:13:00 PM So kind of you to read and for your lovely comments, thank you xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 2/24/2015 1:10:00 AM Lovely write Theresa,, congrats on big win! Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 3/8/2015 1:14:00 PM So pleased to receive your very generous comments, thank you. xx

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/23/2015 8:25:00 AM This is cool! Congrats. Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 3/8/2015 1:15:00 PM Glad to read you enjoyed reading it and thank you for your congrats.xx

Casarah Nance Date: 2/23/2015 7:50:00 AM Ha, sounds like a good party, nicely done on the new form! Unique take and fun too, grats on your win Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 3/8/2015 1:17:00 PM I welcome your visiting and for your very helpful kind comments xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 2/23/2015 7:41:00 AM CONGRATULATIONS THERESA ON WIN. LOVEWYT Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 3/8/2015 1:19:00 PM Thank you so much for reading and for your kind congrats xx

Jan Allison Date: 2/23/2015 2:18:00 AM loved your take on the form - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 3/8/2015 1:28:00 PM Thank you Jan, so pleased you enjoyed reading it. Hugs Theresa xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/23/2015 1:02:00 AM Theresa. your poem stood out as one of the most unique of the bunch. A very entertaining one!!! Great middle word and fun rhymes. Also i enjoyed your creative name for my form. congrats on your win. (hope you will change the word appears for appear. Except for that, your poem is nearly perfect) Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 3/8/2015 1:33:00 PM Thank you Andrea, it was an interesting challenge, which I enjoyed attempting! I have taken your advice after rereading and "appear" it shall be. All the best, Theresa xx

Poesy Relish Date: 2/10/2015 1:59:00 AM Osum pen... liked your take on the topic teresa.. lov, nad!.. 7 Login to Reply Theresa Stephens Date: 3/8/2015 1:34:00 PM Good of you to visit and thank you for commenting. xx