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Party Was a Smash

Fleeting bright orbs appear on camera phone Gasps of surprise within party zone Prompted one more photo flash Scared few made a dash Hearing vase Smash! Lampshade sways Apparent loud crash Discover on arm, red gash Seeming from ceiling an object thrown Fleeting bright orbs appear on camera phone Suggested type: numero uno

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Skat A

Date: 2/27/2015 10:47:00 PM

Theresa, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win :-) ~SKAT~

Theresa Stephens
Date: 3/8/2015 1:13:00 PM

So kind of you to read and for your lovely comments, thank you xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/24/2015 1:10:00 AM

Lovely write Theresa,, congrats on big win!

Theresa Stephens
Date: 3/8/2015 1:14:00 PM

So pleased to receive your very generous comments, thank you. xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/23/2015 8:25:00 AM

This is cool! Congrats.

Theresa Stephens
Date: 3/8/2015 1:15:00 PM

Glad to read you enjoyed reading it and thank you for your congrats.xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 2/23/2015 7:50:00 AM

Ha, sounds like a good party, nicely done on the new form! Unique take and fun too, grats on your win

Theresa Stephens
Date: 3/8/2015 1:17:00 PM

I welcome your visiting and for your very helpful kind comments xx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/23/2015 7:41:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS THERESA ON WIN. LOVEWYT

Theresa Stephens
Date: 3/8/2015 1:19:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading and for your kind congrats xx

Jan Allison

Date: 2/23/2015 2:18:00 AM

loved your take on the form - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xxx

Theresa Stephens
Date: 3/8/2015 1:28:00 PM

Thank you Jan, so pleased you enjoyed reading it. Hugs Theresa xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2015 1:02:00 AM

Theresa. your poem stood out as one of the most unique of the bunch. A very entertaining one!!! Great middle word and fun rhymes. Also i enjoyed your creative name for my form. congrats on your win. (hope you will change the word appears for appear. Except for that, your poem is nearly perfect)

Theresa Stephens
Date: 3/8/2015 1:33:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, it was an interesting challenge, which I enjoyed attempting! I have taken your advice after rereading and "appear" it shall be. All the best, Theresa xx

Poesy Relish

Date: 2/10/2015 1:59:00 AM

Osum pen... liked your take on the topic teresa.. lov, nad!.. 7

Theresa Stephens
Date: 3/8/2015 1:34:00 PM

Good of you to visit and thank you for commenting. xx