Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

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- Party Games -

When your boyfriend comes home late at night
               Your chances are great that you will be in trouble

                                   Here we go again
                             He stinks alcohol and vomit

            // She is angry ... (how angry?) ... hysterical angry //
 
                                       His explanation :

               "Of course, things did not go as I planned, my dear
              The beer was served in the German way, in liter mugs
                                          I'm so sorry
             There were wild conditions all night and time went so fast
                 The rules were simple ~ but a hard competition"
                                         
                                     The walk of shame
                                      (to the bathroom)

                                                 *
                    The head dunks, the party is definitely over
                                        
                                               He :
               "Life sucks ... stop the carousel I'm dizzy ... so dizzy"
                                 
                                             "STOP" !
       
                                                 *

                   












24.02.2018
Sun :) A-L Andresen :)
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Keith O.J. Hunt March 1, 2018 at 7:50 AM That's why I only bought 3 coronas last night! And my girlfriend was in trouble, not me! But I forgive easily....no vomit....my German side is too distinguished to puke on 3 big boys, probably the Bavarian(lol). Very funny poem Sunshine, the ending is genius. Have to fave this;-) Anne-Lise Andresen March 1, 2018 at 1:32 PM - No vomiting ... (thank you) ... I can not stand vomiting ... disgusting !!! :))) - Yes, you have to fave it, and hang it on the toilet :))) - Thank you for your visit and honest comment , Keith :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Reason A. Poteet February 28, 2018 at 7:03 AM I like the way you put this together, Anne-Elise. I'm glad you left him feeling so miserable. When we were in Austria at a musical show, the beer was served either in tiny shot glasses or huge mugs. And oh, those guys that "could handle" a mug or more, they could hardly get back on the bus. Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2018 at 7:13 AM :))) ... I can see them ... dizzy :))) - Thank you for your visit, comment and fun story, R.A.P. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2018 at 6:00 PM Yep, that is a great assessment, YOU will be in trouble for the dang boyfriend coming home late!! GREAT picture too, sweetie. Anne-Lise Andresen February 28, 2018 at 2:59 AM - Thank you for your visit and lovely comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison February 27, 2018 at 2:18 PM Poem made me giggle and the pic is hilarious Anne lisa!:-) hugs Jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2018 at 2:45 PM - Glad you enjoy this with a giggle, thank you Jan :) - hugs // Anne-LisE :)

Richard Lamoureux February 27, 2018 at 1:04 PM I'm glad to say I have not experiences this many times in my life. Love the cartoon as well. Hugs Rick. Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2018 at 1:08 PM - I have not either, Richard ... luckily :) - To be honest ... I do not like the taste of alkehol - Thank you for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vladislav Raven February 27, 2018 at 8:58 AM Hi Anne-Lise, another excellent write from your pen. I can remember such nights, grew out of them quick enough. The worst thing happened as i did read your work, i got the giggles. Rather childish of me, i know. Well,you succeeded in making me laugh. Loved it. Have a wonderful Tuesday. Hugs....Mike. XX Anne-Lise Andresen February 27, 2018 at 11:32 AM - Nice to see you, Mike :) - Thank you for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

CayCay Godwin February 26, 2018 at 10:42 AM You entertained me and glad I am not to feel as the poem's drinker does. Cleverness from your pen was a good time for me! All the best ... CayCay Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2018 at 11:22 AM - No, he does not feel good at all - Thank you for your visit and lovely comment, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Melissa Tracy February 26, 2018 at 9:12 AM Enjoyable read, Anne-Lise :) good luck in the contest! Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2018 at 11:17 AM - Melissa, thank you for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta February 26, 2018 at 6:45 AM Superbly written , Sunshine ... smile expanding into laugh ... good luck with the contest ... Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2018 at 6:48 AM - Thank you for your visit and lovely comment, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anisha Dutta February 25, 2018 at 10:56 PM Made me laugh. Best wishes n hugs Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2018 at 12:36 AM - Anisha, thank you for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Cheryl Hoffman February 25, 2018 at 8:31 PM Lol, looks like the donkey did more than pin the tail on the donkey! Thanks for the chuckle Ann-Lise and good luck in the contest!~Che :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2018 at 12:38 AM - A long night .... with a lot of beer :) - Thank you for your visit and lovely comment, Cheryl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One February 25, 2018 at 4:24 PM MAde me smile :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 26, 2018 at 12:34 AM - A smile is great, S.O. :) - Thank you for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam February 25, 2018 at 7:43 AM Excellent and a fun read. Enjoyed the humor. Good luck in the contest. (Returned from my Vacation last week) Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2018 at 7:47 AM - Welcome back, Ravi - Nice to see you :) - Thank you for your visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael February 25, 2018 at 7:10 AM I don't think he's going to get away with that excuse...really entertaining... All the best Anne-Lise Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2018 at 7:20 AM - No, he must certainly sleep on the couch :) - Thank you very much, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Supraja Kannan February 24, 2018 at 10:53 PM Ha ha... This is so funny Anne... Loved it... Good luck in the contest... Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2018 at 6:41 AM - Thank you very much, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands February 24, 2018 at 5:24 PM Funny Anne-Lise! I enjoyed :) Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2018 at 6:41 AM - Thank you very much, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham February 24, 2018 at 4:09 PM Haha bet his head was throbbing the next day. Good luck in the contest Sunshine. Love the new pic. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2018 at 6:40 AM - Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit February 24, 2018 at 3:26 PM A fun read..enjoyed the humor..best for a win, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2018 at 6:40 AM - Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)