Parts

Like my car
Systems slow
Part by part
When they go
All is gone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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January 10, 2024 at 1:03 AM
Age can be tough that's for sure. Personally, my oil needs a car change. :) Cheers - Gary
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