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PARTNERS IN LIFE

In the midst of twinkling stars in dark starry nights, you arrived in my life as a breakaway star, the bright trail you left in sky, sparkled my heart with heavenly joy. Like two strangers we met on that life's road, Forsaking everyone we had in this world, Like two loving hearts strolling as one, we made our journey together in the path’s unknown, Like the twinkling stars in the sky, we were eternally there for each other. The fun and excitements of life, we enjoyed together as delicate wine, The pain and sorrows of life, we shared together as bad dreams, The joy and worries of raising family, we cherished with sublime sweet emotions. The unhappiness and discord in life, we overcame with our trust and love divine. No matter what lies at our unknown destination, rest be assured that I will be yours, and you will be mine.

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Date: 12/6/2023 1:40:00 PM
Such a wonderful poem Jay. I enjoyed reading it so very much. Filled with love and devotion. A favorite of mine.
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Date: 12/5/2023 9:02:00 PM
"The fun and excitements of life, we enjoyed together as delicate wine, The pain and sorrows of life, we shared together as bad dreams." A beautiful image of shared companionship. The whole poem is a strong avowal of love. I see here a relationship, sprouting and blossoming into a sacred union of trust and dedication to each other. Lovely poem, dear Jay
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Date: 12/5/2023 4:57:00 PM
I love the reflective and positive tone of your poem. I especially liked we overcame with our trust and love divine. Unconditional love...divine. enjoy your evening, Sara
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