Partners

PARTNERS   



The circus tent is filled  tonight.
I  enter  front-door, nerves a-tight
Climb  uncertain angles and heights
Spangles and tights and flashing lights
Up,  around, fall-defying
High trapeze - terrifying
Out of reach, smiling twirling, 
Kept in balance, blonde hair swirling

Anxious glance below, and pause,
Then climb down to wild applause.




Never noticed by the crowd
Below in darkness,  old man proud
His steady  focus with anxious up-gaze,
Adjusts the ropes, the nets,  and  main-stays,
Tighter,  slacker,  under me constantly.
Applause   his signal to go instantly,
Leaves  by back-door every  night,
Knowing his job has been  done right.

Satisfied, content, and all unknown
The netman sleeps and dreams alone.

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Written by Sydney Peck
Entered in David Williams's Contest 	Circus

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/20/2012 9:13:00 AM
nice work,KC... congrats on your well--deserved win which is many miles ahead of me, lol:) huggs
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Date: 5/19/2012 4:00:00 PM
2 charming characters for the price of 1!! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/19/2012 11:01:00 AM
Very good story and well written - congratulations on your win.
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Date: 5/19/2012 9:14:00 AM
I love the personal flavor you gave this performer....playing, not for the crowd, but for his old man! That of course is how we all feel....wanting acknowledgement from those who know us and love us is worth more than fame and glory! Well done, Sydney!
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Date: 5/19/2012 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Circus" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2012 4:00:00 AM
Nice poem... and congrats... Terry
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Date: 5/19/2012 3:27:00 AM
Sydney congrats on your win, loved the whole description you portrayed here..David
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Date: 9/20/2010 4:04:00 PM
Very creative and interesting write on Partners, Sydney
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