Partly Cloudy

My dreams are partly cloudy
Intermingled with a passing breeze
Cold shadows dancing in past passions
Harsh words unsoftened by time
Echo in a dusty chapel
A gentle touch soothes the darkness
A kiss left on a pillow years ago
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 12, 2025 at 5:31 PM
gentle but somber words. I especially liked the last three lines....such softness
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 7:56 PM
Weather or not you like your dreams...
Greenhough Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 1:47 PM
I feel somber tones, almost a Gregorian chant, in the sadness of your words. Time passes not easily.
Lawless Avatar
November 11, 2025 at 6:07 PM
Gregorian chant....haven't heard that since Grammar School. thanks for stopping to read and comment...even a defrocked monk needs validation
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