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Parting

Waves shore-bound break in a calm jade translucence 
Our time together fades into tranquil eternal bliss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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June 14, 2023 at 10:42 PM
Robert this is such a clever theme you have written. The time referenced to the tranquil eternal bliss an amazing expression of words. The picture you selected is perfect for your ambiance reflected in your words. A favorite my friend...
Volumes Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 7:21 PM
Robert, today I sat beside the seaside. I encountered that beauty, but hadn't been able to relate it with such strong illuminating words as yours. Perfect for the contest.
Gorelick Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 1:55 PM
A kindred spirit you are, Wendy. So caught up in nature's grand design and hopefully inspired to write more of your lovely contributions.
Anaya Avatar
March 28, 2023 at 6:40 PM
Brilliantly captured, analogy done beautifully, Robert, Bol! Anaya
Gorelick Avatar
March 29, 2023 at 1:57 PM
So moved that you appreciated the analogy that I meant it to be received. Thanks, Anaya
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