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This is one in a series of many. First choosing a photograph and then writing the poem based on the photograph. Then presenting them as one piece of work. I hope you enjoy. All the photographs in my opinion are superb and submitted by semi professionals who click for the love of it. 

erotic red! colored partially unclad barely a reveal a pole dancer standing provocatively exposes the mold dances the wall on the lap of the paint peeled raw to the grain she tugs at your groin rattles your pallet revs the engine of your pristine thoughts shoves your brain into the ground erotic read!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/20/2014 6:16:00 PM
Good one, Maurice...the words paint a picture on their own! I don't know how to insert pics yet! :( I'm so challenged! Hugs!
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Date: 9/13/2014 8:43:00 PM
Very nice but I really would of liked more details,just kidding.How did You install Your Picture.I have a Premium Membership and I unable to install Photos?I like Your effect the poem had with Your Photo...
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Date: 9/13/2014 7:12:00 PM
A fine package, the write, the pic and the stirring of our imagination! Giving this gem a super 7 my friend.. Bravo!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/13/2014 7:30:00 PM
thank you that is a very kind compliment.
Date: 9/13/2014 6:51:00 PM
stunning picture - provocative write with great imagery - you forgot to say she tugs your wallet as well as your groin ! Hugs Jan xxx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/13/2014 7:30:00 PM
the unedited version though calm in my opinion is maybe too racy for here uses a different picture and has the wallet line in it. in this one the pole dancer is not literal. good for you for thinking of the line.
Date: 9/13/2014 5:56:00 PM
"revs the engine of your pristine thoughts" what a freakin' great line! I'm drowning in envy. Love the picture the only bad thing is that I'm running low on lotion! :)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/13/2014 5:58:00 PM
hahahaha.
Date: 9/13/2014 5:50:00 PM
Interesting, i like the pic, i like the poem, well done
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/13/2014 5:58:00 PM
thanks Cas

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