Maurice Yvonne Poet Free verse

Notes About The Poem

This is one in a series of many. First choosing a photograph and then writing the poem based on the photograph. Then presenting them as one piece of work. I hope you enjoy. All the photographs in my opinion are superb and submitted by semi professionals who click for the love of it. 

Partially Unclad Barely a Reveal

erotic red!

colored
partially unclad
barely a reveal

a pole dancer
standing provocatively 

exposes the mold
dances the wall
on the lap of the paint 
peeled raw to the grain

she tugs at your groin
rattles your pallet
revs the engine of your pristine thoughts
shoves your brain into the ground

erotic read!

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Eileen Manassian September 20, 2014 at 6:16 PM Good one, Maurice...the words paint a picture on their own! I don't know how to insert pics yet! :( I'm so challenged! Hugs!

Charlene Wilcox September 13, 2014 at 8:43 PM Very nice but I really would of liked more details,just kidding.How did You install Your Picture.I have a Premium Membership and I unable to install Photos?I like Your effect the poem had with Your Photo...

Robert Lindley September 13, 2014 at 7:12 PM A fine package, the write, the pic and the stirring of our imagination! Giving this gem a super 7 my friend.. Bravo! Maurice Yvonne September 13, 2014 at 7:30 PM thank you that is a very kind compliment.

Jan Allison September 13, 2014 at 6:51 PM stunning picture - provocative write with great imagery - you forgot to say she tugs your wallet as well as your groin ! Hugs Jan xxx Maurice Yvonne September 13, 2014 at 7:30 PM the unedited version though calm in my opinion is maybe too racy for here uses a different picture and has the wallet line in it. in this one the pole dancer is not literal. good for you for thinking of the line.

Sebastian Aaron Baez September 13, 2014 at 5:56 PM "revs the engine of your pristine thoughts" what a freakin' great line! I'm drowning in envy. Love the picture the only bad thing is that I'm running low on lotion! :) Maurice Yvonne September 13, 2014 at 5:58 PM hahahaha.

Casarah Nance September 13, 2014 at 5:50 PM Interesting, i like the pic, i like the poem, well done Maurice Yvonne September 13, 2014 at 5:58 PM thanks Cas