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Partially To Blame

I can no longer pretend the lies you tell me are true. And if they don't quickly end our relationship is through. Expecting kisses and beers you can't make sense of it all. For you are greeted with tears, and an emotional wall. You claim you never cheated, acting like someone deranged. And I wasn't mistreated, citing the vows we exchanged. Tears choreograph the dance as forgiveness is pursued. And you beg another chance hoping to soften my mood. But the truth levies a toll in the form of pain and shame. And a small part of my soul feels I'm partially to blame. 10/30/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Gauthier Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Great poem about the typical dysfunctional relationship. "And a small part of my soul feels I'm partially to blame" gives hope to a lesson learned leading to improvements in the future.
Pinet Avatar
March 14, 2018 at 3:23 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your encouragement and support my friend, Emile.
Leake Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 10:49 AM
Great write Emile, Maybe it's just a game after all!!! Best Wishes Kevin
Pinet Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 12:42 PM
Thanks Kevin, I appricate your support. Emile.
Lane Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 10:11 AM
Sounds like no winners. I found that out the hard way, and if you care to read my, No Extra Innings, you may see what I mean. In my relationship his mistress was a bottle. Sad, no matter what spoils the love. A nice write, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
October 30, 2015 at 12:43 PM
Thanks Lin, I appricate your support. Emile.
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