Constance La France Poet Dodoitsu

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Part 2- Fully Booked

 
His bluest eye, oh that blue,
Like the azure sky above;
As deep as the blue ocean,
Dead eyes, fathomless.


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June 23, 2016


Poetry/Dodoitsu/Part 2-  Fully Booked
Copyright Protected, ID 16-803-635-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Inspiration - "The Bluest Eye" Novel Title


For the contest, Part 2, Fully Booked
sponsor, Nette Onclaud

Third Place

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Nette Onclaud June 26, 2016 at 10:10 AM i got enthralled by your last 2 lines, constance-- great metaphor... sweet congrats on your award in my contest.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2016 at 9:33 AM Big congrats, Constance. Ruben is right about that last line. And I just noticed I had already said that as well!!

Balveen Cheema June 26, 2016 at 8:21 AM Heartfelt, as usual, Constance!

Karam Misra June 25, 2016 at 8:53 PM It has to be a 7 for this, Broken Wings! Congrats on your win. ~karam~

Janice Canerdy June 25, 2016 at 4:05 PM A 7 for this thought-provoking piece, a winner, Constance! Janice

John Lawless June 23, 2016 at 9:02 PM wicked twist in that last line. Well written and a brilliant take on the book title theme

Andrea Dietrich June 23, 2016 at 8:40 PM wow, the last line changed it! Great job with the theme.