Park Opus

Park  Opus


Quick, scatter, chatter
Gather, store, hide, tail sailing
Fall labor, Fall fun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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July 6, 2013 at 10:26 PM
:-) enjoying your Featured Poem of the week. take care and have yourself a great coming week. xox~ LINDA
Anglesey Avatar
July 4, 2013 at 2:34 PM
Barbara, Your poem full of energy, life and serenity. Love this. Found it on the Featured Poem of the Week. Congratulations :)
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July 4, 2013 at 10:15 AM
BARBARA, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. have a nice 4th of July. *SKAT
Debole Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 11:24 AM
You had me thinking about squirrels without ever saying the word...love your poem! Strong imagery. Congrats on your poem being featured this week.
Austin Avatar
July 1, 2013 at 9:45 AM
Love this Fall rhapsody. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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December 15, 2008 at 9:59 PM
Dear Barbara, I have many squirrels all around my cabin Yes they certainly CHATTER My dogs never bother them when their foraging Great Write LOVE...HG--- YES I am a Chef and a teacher at the N.H. School of Culinary Arts The convention went well 4 blue ribbons 2 red 1green My students have accumulated 277 Blues 84 RED 60 green in the past 12 years I visited SF in the late 70s The Fishermans Wharf also saw the BRIDGE YOUR POETRY FRIEND...HG
Mckenzie Avatar
November 21, 2008 at 6:45 PM
Wonderful flow and imageryin the hunt ! Laura :)
Strand Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 12:21 AM
Lots of pace in this one Barabara.Rgds Brian
Degenhardt Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 12:55 PM
Aah, the imagery of the squirrels as they gather their food for the winter. Such clear imagery and a very fun read. Michael
Reynolds Avatar
November 14, 2008 at 3:33 AM
YAY FALL! I love it so, and this was so sweet. love Kristin
Fawcett Avatar
November 13, 2008 at 3:07 PM
Looking forward to your next post Barbara; missed seeing something from you today! Love, Nigel
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November 13, 2008 at 12:03 AM
Lovely Haiku Barbara. Reminds me of the squirrels in the parks back in the UK. Great choice of words and punctuation to convey action. Love, Nigel
Strand Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 11:41 PM
Like the allieration style and pac of this one Barbara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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