Parisian Passion

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Parisian Passion Tilly came to the place made for romance Paris the capital city of France The place where sentimental dreams are made This was her most spine-tingling escapade. Bustling city, a busy buzzing place Yet everyone had a smile on their face Tilly was not disappointed at all She was in awe of the chaotic sprawl. Tilly wasn’t there on her lonesome for long Soon a dapper Parisian came along Debonair he was, charismatic too Bravely she agreed to a rendezvous. They dined on a Seine River sunset trip Then beneath stars danced on a high footbridge At midnight the Eiffel Tower lit up That was the moment the two fell in love. Tilly’s beau hugged her tightly to his chest As if by magic their eager lips met Sharing fascination of a French kiss Gently exploring inner luscious lips. Twas Tilly’s first ever tongue touching kiss Igniting feelings of absolute bliss Knowing in her heart she had found her fate There could never be a finer soulmate. That was the start of a lifelong romance Coming together by lucks happenstance The two became one when joined in marriage Living the passionate charms of Paris. *+*+* 14th November 2022

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/15/2022 1:38:00 AM

Love this poem my friend and of course, the cherry on the top for me, was the super delicious Parisian wedding. so well written dear Belle. kindest regards, Jennifer.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/15/2022 4:09:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer, who could not fall in love if only for the city of Paris, have been there once and the atmosphere was pure magic… Belle x

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/14/2022 10:25:00 AM

What a twist as such affairs are usually cinq à sept! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/14/2022 6:00:00 PM

I guess they are in the city of romance Rico, pleased you enjoyed the read… Maloha! ~ Belle

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/14/2022 8:23:00 AM

So romantic. I've been to Paris twice but found it expensive.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/14/2022 5:54:00 PM

I went to Paris six years ago, it was lovely and yes it’s expensive, imagine how it would be now with the cost of living increases. Thank you Victor… Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/14/2022 6:10:00 AM

Paris is also known as the City of Lights or the City of Love. It's a wonderful city noted for its opulence, excellent fragrances, and good dining. With a romantic air Belle, your poem has covered all of these topics brilliantly. Excellent work.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/14/2022 5:50:00 PM

Thank you Sotto, I’ve been once to Paris on a weekend trip with my sister and it was wonderful, it truly is the city of romance... Belle