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Paris Floods In the city of young lovers Of those lost philosophers I rushed there to be Alone Walking along ancient stone I was flooded With wine The rains would not stop Depressions grasp soon to make me drop Surrounded by poetry Buried in the authors plume Black ink crawls all over Devouring what little was left of me Celts marched long ago In footsteps I silently trace the sadness The blood of angst fills me heart I can no longer live inside those stories of lore Rains keep falling Rain pouring over me Surrounded by books I succumb to my death you know as The Paris Floods Drowned by poetry

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Date: 9/24/2016 5:08:00 PM
Where were the Celts marching?
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arthur vaso
Date: 9/24/2016 5:56:00 PM
I was referring to the The Celtic-Ligurians, who fought against both the Greeks and the Romans in today's southern France, sent you a soup mail! :) Cheers
Date: 9/22/2016 6:51:00 PM
great imagery, ARthur!! I really like this one. The last line really clinches it!!
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arthur vaso
Date: 9/23/2016 12:44:00 AM
The next one even better! :) Hugs
Date: 9/22/2016 8:36:00 AM
and you spill ink, arthur!... i hope you know how to swim back; lovely!..huggs
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arthur vaso
Date: 9/23/2016 12:44:00 AM
I wish I knew too! Hugs!
Date: 9/22/2016 7:22:00 AM
Yes Sir, you are one hell of a poet, seeing every mundane things in a different light and then executing them with immaculate wordings.Salute.
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arthur vaso
Date: 9/23/2016 12:43:00 AM
I have added you to the payroll, thank you! :)
Date: 9/22/2016 6:35:00 AM
Well done my friend...
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arthur vaso
Date: 9/23/2016 12:36:00 AM
Thanks Charlie! :)
Date: 9/22/2016 6:19:00 AM
Oh my! My friend, Author, you penned this great and beautiful. Brilliant gem...........A.M.
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arthur vaso
Date: 9/23/2016 12:36:00 AM
You are also truly kind in your words thank you!
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Date: 9/22/2016 6:22:00 AM
Wrote it, rather. Lol!
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Date: 9/22/2016 6:21:00 AM
Author, I sincerely like the method with which you write it. You are a gifted poet. Much love my friend.