Parhelion

Spectrum of colors, Shards of light illuminates— Sundogs in the sky.

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 12/12/2009 11:09:00 AM

cool sundog Haiku,Raul. Like it alot. Robert

James Fraser

Date: 12/3/2009 1:05:00 PM

Excellent title Raul's accompanying an excellent Haiku >> James

Elaine George

Date: 12/3/2009 12:58:00 AM

Haiku's are you genre, my friend. Another masterpiece. Lainie

Marty Owens

Date: 12/2/2009 10:10:00 PM

Very nice...enjoyed...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2009 9:11:00 PM

Interesting title to your haiku, Raul.. and your new contest is more exciting than the previous two haiku requirements.. luv the challenge of contests.. thankxxx for your unique thoughts and ideas for contests here on Soup... happy to participate... blessings... luv.. "Sweetheart"

James Peranteau

Date: 12/2/2009 5:27:00 PM

Fantastic Raul ! Many souls have seen our reflective friends but pay no never mind,...a poet truly gives them life,..as you have here !!!! Great write Sir ! Great Haiku !!!!! james,...to mine favs ! One of Jehovah's fine arts !!!! Bravo!!

Date: 12/2/2009 9:33:00 AM

Good use of alliteration and imagery for a creative view. I hope you are publishing some of these gems elsewhere for others outside The Soup to enjoy. Thank you for choosing my poem as one of your contest winners. I am honored. Have a good day! Karen

Abe Lopez

Date: 12/2/2009 9:15:00 AM

these are small but very beautiful when they are against the bright blue!!!! thank you for your thoughtfulness on "moon fables"

Jared Pickett

Date: 12/2/2009 8:20:00 AM

"Sundogs in the sky" Good line, awesome poem Raul......:JP]

Brian Strand

Date: 12/2/2009 7:38:00 AM

Like the alliteration Raul.Thank you for the encouragement today for my poetry endeavours.Rgds Brian

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/1/2009 5:49:00 PM

A perfect picture, Raul! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/1/2009 3:56:00 PM

nicely penned, keep sharing, thanks for sponsoring contest they keep me on my toes and inspired!!:)

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/1/2009 3:30:00 PM

I love your vividly descriptive words in this haiku. I want to let you know that I fixed my contest entry - didn't realize I'd somehow missed the theme. I removed the other entry and submitted a new one. Hopefully I was on track this time. I blame either early senior moments or my new progressive lens glasses that I'm not used to yet as the reason I missed the "Reflections" theme. lol Sorry about that...

Richard Pickett

Date: 12/1/2009 3:17:00 PM

illuminating at the very least. Nice penning here..I like...RdP

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/1/2009 3:09:00 PM

Interesting wording on this one. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/1/2009 2:27:00 PM

Sundogs in the sky,sometimes called the mocking suns..usually a storm follows after these Parhelion..i can picture this view.. a spectrum of colors indeed,,awesome Raul,,original work--Charma