Parenthood

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The day you were born was my euphoric high
When everything changed hearing your first cry
As hearts synchronized in embrace with a sigh
And every breathe of your being became my joy.

Eating and sleeping occupied your early days 
New things I learned with each sound you made
Your jittery moves said you wanted to be held
Your cooing grew louder each time we played.

When you began walking you waddled on toes
Your first word uttered was music to my ears
When you played soccer your goal was my score
Every time you raised the bar, I shed happy tears.

When you first learned to bike, I glided in pride
When we first argued, I knew you were growing
As you became an adult, I lingered alongside
When I heard logic, I knew you were thinking.

Every year in college your success became mine
With every misstep that hurt, I lost my footing
Your graduation day was my time in sunshine
No matter the anguish, I never stopped rooting.

When I saw you venture out with a brilliant start
I know you looked back with love and gratitude
While I  must stay back and let you chart you path 
I will be cheering when you reach your altitude. 

October 15, 2017
Placed 2nd: Parenthood
Sponsor: Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/9/2017 12:06:00 PM
This is such a beautiful poem, Vijay. It moved my spirit to tears ... of joy, for I and many others can relate to being that proud parent. It is a labor of love so well expressed in this passionate poem. Elegance of prose defined by this inked jewel of love. Aurora bright write. Love and peace always.
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Date: 11/6/2017 7:15:00 AM
congrats on your win Vijay, nice piece of work. enjoyed..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 11/6/2017 7:57:00 AM
Thank you Bojosi!
Date: 10/25/2017 8:10:00 PM
Blessings and congrats for your well-deserved win, Vijay - keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:39:00 AM
Thank you Greg!
Date: 10/23/2017 8:42:00 AM
Wonderful piece ... Congratulations ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Probir!
Date: 10/23/2017 3:44:00 AM
Greetings Vijay. Congrats for your well-deserved second placement in the contest, with this awesome piece! ;-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Teddy!
Date: 10/21/2017 5:56:00 PM
Beautifully written, Vijay. You have been blessed during your years of parenthood. Congrats on a fine win. Sandra
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Date: 10/26/2017 10:38:00 AM
Thank you Sandra!
Date: 10/20/2017 10:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/26/2017 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Subimal!
Date: 10/20/2017 5:20:00 PM
WoW!Vijay, You chronicled the ups and downs of parenthood very well. I can totally relate. Because through it all my children our my greatest joy. Congratulations on your 2nd place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/20/2017 4:26:00 PM
Another great rhyming poem, that flows very well.. You explain the journey of trials and tribulations of parenting very well... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/18/2017 9:52:00 AM
Very nicely penned ... A sure win ...
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Date: 10/16/2017 9:46:00 PM
This wonderful poem movingly details the precious highlights of raising a child! Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/16/2017 10:38:00 PM
Thank you Janice--appreciate your comments!
Date: 10/16/2017 5:15:00 PM
Quite a journey for us all, well done Vijay...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/16/2017 5:30:00 PM
Thank you Charlie!
Date: 10/16/2017 4:30:00 PM
It's a big part of what life is all about and you showed that so nicely, Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/16/2017 5:30:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!
Date: 10/16/2017 11:01:00 AM
You have covered the topic well with all the attendant feelings. Good write.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/16/2017 4:01:00 PM
Delighted by your visit--appreciate your comments Patricia!
Date: 10/16/2017 10:43:00 AM
Nicely done, Vijay,luck in the contest. The future of a parent I would do it all over again, Hugs Eve ~`*
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/16/2017 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Eve--appreciate your comments!
Date: 10/16/2017 7:57:00 AM
Wow, Vijay, you have surely written an excellent write here my friend! I loved the way you wove throughout your poem the stages of childhood experiences and benchmarks that were achieved! What a fabulous piece, such a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/16/2017 3:59:00 PM
Very happy to read your feedback--thank you, Russell!
Date: 10/16/2017 4:57:00 AM
Excellent poem Vijay, I can make a connection with this well written poem, I have similar memories of my two wonderful children, parenthood in my opinion is the best experience. GL in contest. :))
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Date: 10/16/2017 3:59:00 PM
Many thanks Roy--appreciate your comments!
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