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Pardon Me

Pardon me Did you just A foul smell penetrated my senses No where to hide Just smile and bear it No idea what you mean Thank God The sermon was almost over Fresh air at last Great sermon Father See you next Sunday FOR CONTEST

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Date: 11/15/2013 12:02:00 AM
Whoa Richard! Now this is a poem that ignites thinking. I can't help but relate the foul smell to the hypocrisy in religion. Very well written!
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Richard Ferry
Date: 11/15/2013 12:14:00 AM
You got it!

Book: Reflection on the Important Things