Pardon Me

Pardon me        Did you just         A foul smell penetrated my senses         No where to hide       Just smile and bear it         No idea what you mean       Thank God        The sermon was almost over        Fresh air at last         Great sermon Father        See you next Sunday                   FOR CONTEST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Tsiluma Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 12:02 AM
Whoa Richard! Now this is a poem that ignites thinking. I can't help but relate the foul smell to the hypocrisy in religion. Very well written!
Ferry Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 12:14 AM
You got it!
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