Pardon Me

On a tree they hung him high Without sin,condemned to die It is finished was his cry Nailing forever,Satan's lie Alive now,for evermore Is he knocking at your door New life now,he will bring If you would invite him in Listen.. a small voice within Turn back...now wholeness can begin

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Michael Torres

Date: 11/22/2008 12:27:00 PM

Brian how did I miss this one beautiful. Michael Torres

Diane Christian

Date: 11/15/2008 11:33:00 AM

awww this is beautiful, A new life a new beginning, Amen to this beautiful write and hope this news is music to your ears that my James and Leanne are getting baptized next sunday the 23rd of November they both want it so much to be free from Satans' lies and to be born again, they both will have thier new life, two more lives saved Amen, God bless you from diane

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/14/2008 7:12:00 AM

Yes, we can invite in a whole new beginning. That is a promise we can count on. ~ Carrie

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 11/14/2008 2:57:00 AM

Beautigul in sentement, truth and love - were there any more powerful words than those of Christ stated above - "It is done!" gives me chills. Excellent, Brian, love Kristin