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They say I am insane Crazy They wish to lock me up Toss the keys in the river I know I am being watched They are all fools if they say not I see the eyes watching me Do not you?

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/15/2015 6:34:00 AM

Honestly the eyes do win out but I do like the poem a lot. The picture brings to mind the song "I always feel like, someone's watching me!"

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/13/2015 8:58:00 AM

What a great mural, I also like the poem!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/14/2015 12:04:00 AM

OK which one you like better!!! be honest!!!

Jan Allison

Date: 2/12/2015 6:07:00 PM

The eyes have it Arthur:-) Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/14/2015 12:03:00 AM

LOL Love it!!!!

Eve Roper

Date: 2/10/2015 12:46:00 PM

Arthur, beautiful canvas you have painted with your pen. 7 Blessings dear friend Eve

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/10/2015 8:36:00 PM

Thank you Eve, so kind of you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/9/2015 6:56:00 PM

haha. this goes SO WELL with your picture. It made it all the more interesting!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/9/2015 8:47:00 PM

Thanks Andrea!!

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 2/9/2015 4:31:00 PM

You should be, I am watching you!!!!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/15/2015 6:35:00 AM

My guess is that the two of you are joined at the lip!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/9/2015 8:47:00 PM

As I am you :)

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/9/2015 3:36:00 PM

Ok dear Arthur, love the pic you chose totally cool, goes great with your lines just perfect, about the poem all I can say is interesting work here my friend, cheri

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/9/2015 8:46:00 PM

Thanks Cherl , glad to see you