Parallel Universes

revelation of revelations!
an ordinary morning til..
discovery of discoveries 
brittle chrysalis
upside down, branching
breathing, pulsing
I pause and
inspect the
pupa’s fortress
tight and hard as 
childhood memories of
milkweed pods 
splaying, splitting, dropping
fragments into the
pungent soil beneath

My birth sac
splits apart
Baptismal waters
run down my legs
he’s going to be a
football player the 
doctor predicts.
one last push
spills my babe
onto linen’s 
glaring whiteness.
oops, he’s a she
and so beautiful.

A parallel universe
repeats, reflects, completes 
an ever changing 
life cycle
sunshine dries
black and orange panes
tiny filaments of gossamer
wings shimmer silky white
against the opaque sun

Dad’s car delivers
mom and babe home
their newborn squalls.
her tiny fingers 
curl in a tight fist.
each digit is a
prayer bead
chanting its presence.

I gaze in amazement 
my mind awhirl
wings and elbows,
antennae and toes
displace space now that
seconds before was
unknown. unclaimed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/17/2018 5:37:00 PM
I love this depiction of the birth of a child and of the emerging butterfly and of how we share the same universe.I especially liked the last stanza. I think this is cleverly written Kathleen and really quite beautiful.Thank you.
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Date: 7/17/2018 6:01:00 PM
Thanks, Sylvia. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 6/29/2018 9:24:00 PM
A very clever write!
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Date: 6/29/2018 10:37:00 AM
I enjoyed this so much - and the idea of the parallel universe.
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