Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Parallel Images

Enchanting
Is beauty of your love
Fragrant, colorful, blossoms of spring

Delighting
Robins on willow trees
To woo your summers in playful hints

Riveting
Your passions marigold
In musings gamboge of autumn's leaves

Fulfilling
Desires of snow white dreams
Kissing you as snowflakes are falling

March 4, 2021
Placed 1st: Images in parallel poetry contest
Sponsor: Joseph May
Syllables per stanza: 3,6,9

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Valsa George January 14, 2022 at 4:06 AM This shift from season to season is so ingeniously done and without our knowledge, we taste the whole year from beginning to end. A beautiful poem and as always a winner.... ! Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich March 16, 2021 at 2:07 PM I knew this was a winner. BIG congrats

Joanna Daniel March 16, 2021 at 2:22 AM Oh, seasonal love and beauty, mesmerising write, Vijay, congratulations:)

Joseph May March 15, 2021 at 5:31 AM Very nicely done Vijay, Congrats on your win..

Paul Callus March 9, 2021 at 4:52 AM You travel from one season to another with the use of lovely imagery, Vijay. Well done! ~ Regards // paul Vijay Pandit March 9, 2021 at 5:52 AM Much appreciate Paul--many thanks. Regards.

Andrea Dietrich March 8, 2021 at 1:56 PM Fantastic images for this contest. i really enjoyed the form that joseph brought us to do with his contest. i'm sure I will see this on the winners' list. Vijay Pandit March 9, 2021 at 5:51 AM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Angela Crabtree March 6, 2021 at 2:43 PM Wonderful images expressed in your words for the seasons. A definite winner for sure, Vijay :) Vijay Pandit March 6, 2021 at 2:58 PM Thank you Angela--much appreciate your vote of confidence.

Demetrios Trifiatis March 6, 2021 at 5:21 AM Enchanting melody of a poetic symphony your parallel images, my dearest friend, Vijay! Vijay Pandit March 6, 2021 at 5:56 AM Thank you my friend for your visit and lovely comments. Much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy March 5, 2021 at 4:45 PM Vijay, your poem is descriptive, romantic, and delightful! Janice Vijay Pandit March 6, 2021 at 5:55 AM Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Judy Ball March 5, 2021 at 2:30 PM WoW! Another really nice one. You are the king of the romantic lines. Good job. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit March 6, 2021 at 5:55 AM Thank you Judy--much appreciate.

Linda Alice Fowler March 5, 2021 at 8:42 AM Stunning seasonal images Vijay. Best wishes for the contest. :) Linda Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 12:51 PM Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks--many thanks, Linda.

Mike Gentile March 5, 2021 at 8:37 AM This is beautiful Vijay. Truly all seasons offer beauty in their different forms. Great idea for the contest! Happy Friday!! Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 12:51 PM Much appreciate Mike--many thanks.

Malabika Ray Choudhury March 5, 2021 at 7:17 AM Love the beautiful parallel images, Vijay! Wonderfully expressed ~ Mala Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 12:50 PM Thank you Mala--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2021 at 5:13 AM - Many beautiful images using in short lines, Vijay ... wonderful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 5:54 AM Much appreciate your kind remarks, Anne-Lise. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole March 4, 2021 at 8:37 PM Oh my ! All of the seasons collide within, simply leaving me in complete awe. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. "To woo your summers in playful hints" Such a breathtaking thought. I am smiling. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 5:54 AM Much appreciate your cheerful feedback, as always. Many thanks, Brandy.

Harry Horsman March 4, 2021 at 7:10 PM In perfect harmony, Vijay, truly beautiful poetry. Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 5:53 AM Thank you Harry--much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney March 4, 2021 at 5:53 PM Nice one, Vijay: Lovely imagery of all seasons. Hugs, SuZ Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 5:52 AM Thank you SuZ. Much appreciate--glad you stopped by.

Richard Lamoureux March 4, 2021 at 2:37 PM She sounds like a slice of amazing. Well expressed.;0) Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 5:52 AM Much appreciate Richard--many thanks.

Arturo Michael March 4, 2021 at 9:07 AM Four powerful words...embodies your write...Well done. Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 5:51 AM Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.

Victor Buhagiar March 4, 2021 at 9:01 AM What goes around must come round! Brilliant exposition of the four seasons. Great imagery in so short stanzas. Best for a win. Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 5:51 AM Much appreciate, Victor--many thanks.

Tom Cunningham March 4, 2021 at 8:48 AM You've rose well to the challenge of writing parallel images Vijay. Best of luck in the contest. Tom Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 5:50 AM Much appreciate as always, Tom. Many many thanks.

Judy Ball March 4, 2021 at 8:43 AM Nicely done Vijay. It was a pleasure to walk through the garden with you . Lovely. God Bless, JB Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 5:50 AM Glad you visited Judy with your lovely remarks. Man many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri March 4, 2021 at 8:06 AM So vivid images painted brilliantly! Sublime blend of seasons colours and tempers! So much impressed by your artistic take! An outshining win added to my fave list.. always very much delighted with your wonderful poetry, dear Vijay.. My deepest regards and blessings. Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 5:49 AM Glad to read your comments again, Besma. You are always a joy to read. Much appreciate--man many thanks for the kind feedback. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Carolyn Devonshire March 4, 2021 at 7:48 AM As you walk through snow, images of spring and summer flowers fill your mind. I'd love to take such a walk with you, Vijay. You have a beautiful perspective on life that I cherish when I read your poetry. Stunning! Hugs, Carolyn Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 5:47 AM That is so nice to hear. Glad to read your cheerful feedback my friend. Much appreciate--many thanks, Carolyn.

Alexis Y. March 4, 2021 at 6:01 AM WoW! Vijay, This is an exceptional entry for the contest. You hit this challenge out of the ballpark. I enjoyed it from start to finish. If we still had a rating system, I would give this gem high marks. It's a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis Vijay Pandit March 5, 2021 at 5:44 AM I am thrilled by your vote of confidence my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks, Alexis.

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