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Parallel Images

Enchanting Is beauty of your love Fragrant, colorful, blossoms of spring Delighting Robins on willow trees To woo your summers in playful hints Riveting Your passions marigold In musings gamboge of autumn's leaves Fulfilling Desires of snow white dreams Kissing you as snowflakes are falling March 4, 2021 Placed 1st: Images in parallel poetry contest Sponsor: Joseph May Syllables per stanza: 3,6,9

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Valsa George

Date: 1/14/2022 4:06:00 AM

This shift from season to season is so ingeniously done and without our knowledge, we taste the whole year from beginning to end. A beautiful poem and as always a winner.... ! Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/16/2021 2:07:00 PM

I knew this was a winner. BIG congrats

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/16/2021 2:22:00 AM

Oh, seasonal love and beauty, mesmerising write, Vijay, congratulations:)

Joseph May

Date: 3/15/2021 5:31:00 AM

Very nicely done Vijay, Congrats on your win..

Paul Callus

Date: 3/9/2021 4:52:00 AM

You travel from one season to another with the use of lovely imagery, Vijay. Well done! ~ Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2021 5:52:00 AM

Much appreciate Paul--many thanks. Regards.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2021 1:56:00 PM

Fantastic images for this contest. i really enjoyed the form that joseph brought us to do with his contest. i'm sure I will see this on the winners' list.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/9/2021 5:51:00 AM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Angela Crabtree

Date: 3/6/2021 2:43:00 PM

Wonderful images expressed in your words for the seasons. A definite winner for sure, Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2021 2:58:00 PM

Thank you Angela--much appreciate your vote of confidence.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/6/2021 5:21:00 AM

Enchanting melody of a poetic symphony your parallel images, my dearest friend, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2021 5:56:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your visit and lovely comments. Much appreciate.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/5/2021 4:45:00 PM

Vijay, your poem is descriptive, romantic, and delightful! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2021 5:55:00 AM

Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Judy Ball

Date: 3/5/2021 2:30:00 PM

WoW! Another really nice one. You are the king of the romantic lines. Good job. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/6/2021 5:55:00 AM

Thank you Judy--much appreciate.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/5/2021 8:42:00 AM

Stunning seasonal images Vijay. Best wishes for the contest. :) Linda

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 12:51:00 PM

Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks--many thanks, Linda.

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/5/2021 8:37:00 AM

This is beautiful Vijay. Truly all seasons offer beauty in their different forms. Great idea for the contest! Happy Friday!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 12:51:00 PM

Much appreciate Mike--many thanks.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/5/2021 7:17:00 AM

Love the beautiful parallel images, Vijay! Wonderfully expressed ~ Mala

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 12:50:00 PM

Thank you Mala--much appreciate.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2021 5:13:00 AM

- Many beautiful images using in short lines, Vijay ... wonderful poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 5:54:00 AM

Much appreciate your kind remarks, Anne-Lise. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 3/4/2021 8:37:00 PM

Oh my ! All of the seasons collide within, simply leaving me in complete awe. This is beautiful in so many amazing ways. "To woo your summers in playful hints" Such a breathtaking thought. I am smiling. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 5:54:00 AM

Much appreciate your cheerful feedback, as always. Many thanks, Brandy.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/4/2021 7:10:00 PM

In perfect harmony, Vijay, truly beautiful poetry.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 5:53:00 AM

Thank you Harry--much appreciate.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 3/4/2021 5:53:00 PM

Nice one, Vijay: Lovely imagery of all seasons. Hugs, SuZ

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 5:52:00 AM

Thank you SuZ. Much appreciate--glad you stopped by.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/4/2021 2:37:00 PM

She sounds like a slice of amazing. Well expressed.;0)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 5:52:00 AM

Much appreciate Richard--many thanks.

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/4/2021 9:07:00 AM

Four powerful words...embodies your write...Well done.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 5:51:00 AM

Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/4/2021 9:01:00 AM

What goes around must come round! Brilliant exposition of the four seasons. Great imagery in so short stanzas. Best for a win.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 5:51:00 AM

Much appreciate, Victor--many thanks.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/4/2021 8:48:00 AM

You've rose well to the challenge of writing parallel images Vijay. Best of luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 5:50:00 AM

Much appreciate as always, Tom. Many many thanks.

Judy Ball

Date: 3/4/2021 8:43:00 AM

Nicely done Vijay. It was a pleasure to walk through the garden with you . Lovely. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 5:50:00 AM

Glad you visited Judy with your lovely remarks. Man many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 3/4/2021 8:06:00 AM

So vivid images painted brilliantly! Sublime blend of seasons colours and tempers! So much impressed by your artistic take! An outshining win added to my fave list.. always very much delighted with your wonderful poetry, dear Vijay.. My deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 5:49:00 AM

Glad to read your comments again, Besma. You are always a joy to read. Much appreciate--man many thanks for the kind feedback. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/4/2021 7:48:00 AM

As you walk through snow, images of spring and summer flowers fill your mind. I'd love to take such a walk with you, Vijay. You have a beautiful perspective on life that I cherish when I read your poetry. Stunning! Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 5:47:00 AM

That is so nice to hear. Glad to read your cheerful feedback my friend. Much appreciate--many thanks, Carolyn.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/4/2021 6:01:00 AM

WoW! Vijay, This is an exceptional entry for the contest. You hit this challenge out of the ballpark. I enjoyed it from start to finish. If we still had a rating system, I would give this gem high marks. It's a winner to me. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit
Date: 3/5/2021 5:44:00 AM

I am thrilled by your vote of confidence my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks, Alexis.