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Parallel Evening arrived scattering snowflakes, I sought a solitary Path Through winter’s barren woods Made magical this night With glittering snow Gracing every empty branch Each twig In the muffled silence of a downy dusk And, thinking that I walked Enfolded in the snowy twilight, Only with myself, I overlooked the footprints Slowly walking Side by side With my own – Unnoticed in the rhapsody Of the winter’s stormy Forest celebration Until The path uncurled around a curve Revealing in the gathering dusk Another traveler, Familiar to my heart, Plodding Through the windblown drifts Bent, Stooping beneath a heavy burden Slipping side to side With every step Until the baggage Pulled The bearer to the snowbound path – A solitary figure Captured in the jealous grip of gravity - And so I left my reveries, My path, Crossing through the unmarked snow, The snowy wall, Between us To lift the burden Of my companion in the twilight To follow in the footsteps – In silence - And Knowing I could not lead upon this path, Nor walk within the chambers of another heart, But only trace the tracks Outlining the journey of my friend In this brief moment of time and stars Beneath a darkening sky Till we would walk in parallel Again.

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Date: 3/7/2020 5:38:00 PM
Quite nice, Sam. Perhaps a recognition of your common Nature? Charles
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/8/2020 7:02:00 PM
Thank you Charles for your visit and your message. Yes! I share a special friendship with the friend in this poem!
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Date: 3/7/2020 5:40:00 PM
Quite nice, Sam. Perhaps a recognition of your common Nature? Charles
Date: 3/6/2020 7:47:00 AM
A FAV! Loved it! I especially liked the last eight lines... I could not lead upon this path, Nor walk within the chambers of another heart, But only trace the tracks Outlining the journey of my friend In this brief moment of time and stars Beneath a darkening sky Till we would walk in parallel Again.
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Date: 2/19/2020 11:59:00 AM
I am so happy to see this worthy poem chosen as POTD Sam. Congratulations! You already know by my Fave how much I loved it! xxoo
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/19/2020 11:02:00 PM
Thank you my aloha friend! And to think I almost didn't enter it - so glad I did. It seems to have touched many folks.
Date: 2/16/2020 2:19:00 PM
A wonderful poem, Sam. So well written...Congratulations on POTD. Have a lovely weekend. Charlie
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/17/2020 10:59:00 PM
Hi Charlie! Thank you for your compliment and congratulations on the POTD! This poem is very special to me. Busy weekend! Hope you had a wonderful weekend. Blessings.
Date: 2/16/2020 7:03:00 AM
Belated congrats on poem of the day Sam--awesome poetry--so well deserved!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/17/2020 11:00:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. This was quite a wonderful surprise!
Date: 2/15/2020 9:03:00 PM
Sam, a well-deserved POTD for this heartrending write. Congratulations ~ John
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/17/2020 11:06:00 PM
Thank you so much John. Your messages are always appreciated! Written for a special friend who lost her mom.
Date: 2/15/2020 8:01:00 PM
My eyes are misty. This tugs deeply at my heart. The journey of your friend- has ended. In this life. Forever to live in the next. Your thoughts caress gently around me. Congratulations Sam, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/12/2020 11:08:00 PM
Thank you Brandy for your sweet words and congratulations! They are most appreciated. Stay healthy! Have a great weekend.
Date: 2/15/2020 3:36:00 PM
Back with congratulations for scoring a p.o.t.d. win with this masterwork, Sam!:-)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/12/2020 11:00:00 PM
Hi Edward, just now getting back to you to thank you for your congratulations and continued support! Stay healthy my friend.
Date: 2/15/2020 3:22:00 PM
Congrats on POTD!! Well deserved! As mentioned hints of Robert Frost! Whose woods these are I think I know, His house is in the village though... Love your style!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/6/2020 10:44:00 AM
Hi Krish, Thank you. As I said to John, to have a remote echo of Robert Frost is truly a an honor especially since this poem was written for a friend when she lost her mother. Frost is one of my favorites.
Date: 2/15/2020 3:05:00 PM
I hear the faint strains of Robert Frost in these echoing sentiments. Beautifully done
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/6/2020 10:41:00 AM
Hi John, thank you for your words. I am highly honored by your compliment. For this poem to have a similarity to Robert Frost is a high compliment indeed.
Date: 2/15/2020 2:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD. "Beautiful" Enjoy your weekend.........
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Date: 3/12/2020 11:09:00 PM
Thank you Paula. Always wonderful to have you visit. Stay healthy friend!
Date: 2/15/2020 1:39:00 PM
- ... wow... excellent poem, Sam :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2020 11:11:00 AM
A great poem! Congratulations for POTD :)
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Date: 2/15/2020 10:53:00 AM
I like the concept of, "walking in parallel" Congratulations Sam on POTD
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Date: 2/15/2020 7:42:00 AM
I loved this one on the first read so happy to see it displayed to read again, Congratulations on your POTD Sam... hugs
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Date: 2/15/2020 7:37:00 AM
Very nicely penned, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 2/15/2020 7:25:00 AM
Great choice for POTD!
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Date: 2/15/2020 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations! That was absolutely beautiful.
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Date: 2/15/2020 6:41:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD, Sam.
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Date: 2/15/2020 6:40:00 AM
A lovely write my friend...thoughtful and spiritual...Congrats!! on your POTD!!...all the best for 2020 from the Wingster...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 2/15/2020 5:47:00 AM
Thoughtful thoughts for a companion, well penned Sam, congratulations on your POTD.
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Date: 2/15/2020 1:08:00 AM
Well composed Sam, love the imagery in your verse. Congratulations on POTD honours. Have a great weekend. Tom
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Date: 2/14/2020 2:36:00 PM
Amazing write, Sam. Quite a journey of lending a friendly hand in the snow. I particularly liked "Captured in the jealous grip of gravity". Well done and congrats!
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Date: 2/14/2020 4:22:00 AM
Quite a stellar write, Sam! You're on a roll with these first place finishes:-) Congrats on your first place win!
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Date: 2/14/2020 4:13:00 AM
Such an exquisite write. This one is heart touching and beautiful Sam.. excellent metaphor and images. Love this congratulations on your win :) hugs
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