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Parakeets, I Have Loved

Years ago, I had two pretty parakeet birds,
the girl, I called Sky for she was blue like the sky;
Forest was hues, both were hard to describe in words,
sometimes, I opened their blue cage so they could fly !

The girl, I called Sky for she was blue like the sky,
in time, they became lovers with kisses and tweets;
I sprayed them with water and they flapped wings to dry,
they both sang loud and could be heard for many streets !

In time, they became lovers with kisses and tweets,
then, the landlord said, "your parakeets, they must go;"
on their last day I gave my birds kisses and treats,
and I found a home for them with a friend I know ! 

Then, the landlord said, "your parakeets, they must go,"
Forest was hues, both were hard to describe in words;
and I found a home for them with a friend I know,
years ago, I had two pretty parakeet birds !

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May 26, 2021


Poetry/Pantoum/Parakeets, I Have Loved
Copyright Protected, ID 05-1358-313-26
All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France

Written for the Standard contest, Pantoum Rhyme
sponsor, Eve Roper (Inspiration pic #2) Judged 06/26/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rose  Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 12:22 PM
this is so well done Constance and I so love parakeets . I have one named Charlie that we bought last year, very smart bird, sending love and congrats !
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July 18, 2021 at 8:31 AM
Mystic, thank you for the compliment, mom had one she called Pete, one day she put his cage on the porch and the wind knocked it over, then she had my brother not long after and called him Peter, who became of course Pete ~ love and serenity _Constance
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June 25, 2021 at 11:15 AM
Congrats and kudos on your win Constance. This is so sweet and tender. Blessings and a hug!
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June 25, 2021 at 3:44 PM
Sam, thank you for the congrats and for the compliment, love _Constance
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June 24, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Wow! Congratulations. Thanks for sharing this in your awesome poetic style. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
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June 25, 2021 at 8:01 AM
Beata, thank you for the congratulations and the compliment, any you are welcome on your win, love _Constance
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June 24, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Congratulation on your win, Constance. <3 Eve
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June 25, 2021 at 8:02 AM
Eve, thank you for the inspiration and the contest and my great placement and for the congratulations, love _Constance
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June 24, 2021 at 12:28 PM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful story/write about your parakeet birds. Enjoy your win/day with blessings............
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June 25, 2021 at 8:03 AM
Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment, love _Constance
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June 24, 2021 at 12:07 PM
Constance, I would have thought that the picture matches their names, albeit, you have piqued my interest in Forest, hmm, most intriguing -- Alas! That ol' meany! All in all, your pantoum was remarkable and I enjoyed reading it. My compliments on your win my friend, Aloha!
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June 25, 2021 at 8:05 AM
William, thank you for the visit and comment, Sky is doing great but sadly Forest went to bird Heaven, thanks also for compliment on my poem and win, peace _Constance
Alex Avatar
June 24, 2021 at 11:53 AM
It's a very beautifully written poem. I like parakeets very much. Congratulations!
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June 25, 2021 at 8:06 AM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, I loved my parakeets but they were just TOO loud for an apartment, peace _Constance
Ball Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 9:17 AM
It's getting pretty bad when you can't even keep a budgie. I say move to a place where you can keep your beloved little friends. That's just too much. I am an animal lover and have had many little birdies. Loved them all. God Bless, JB
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May 27, 2021 at 11:59 AM
Judy, Thank you for the comment, yes, I was heartbroken, but admit they were so happy and very, very loud, which is not good when living in an apartment. I would have to move to the country, but they were sent to a place with a friend who loves birds and has many and I can visit, Forest is gone to bird Heaven and Sky has found a new lover though she is getting old for a bird, love _Constance
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May 26, 2021 at 7:44 PM
Nicely-written Pantoum, Constance. And So many interesting ideas are explored here. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings and regards
La France Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 12:00 PM
Las, thanks for the comment and compliment, peace _Constance
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May 26, 2021 at 7:11 PM
A lovely pantoum, Constance. I was glad they were always going to be together.
La France Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 12:01 PM
Milt, thank you for the compliment, yes, I was happy that could be together singing and kissing, although now, Forest has gone to bird Heaven, peace _Constance
La France Avatar
May 26, 2021 at 6:18 PM
oh, I hope I did this pantoum correctly, it got a bit confusing at the end !!!
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May 27, 2021 at 12:02 PM
Thanks Milt, you are so right, I would not change a word, peace _Constance
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May 26, 2021 at 7:14 PM
Constance, it is a lovely poem, in any case.
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