Yanny Widjanarko Poet Terzanelle

Paradoxical Premise

Stands on the land of heterodox
Who's the mightiest God of all?
People live and die on their equivocation thoughts

Those who exclaimed about the God who never fall
Inversely proportional to what they always do
Who's the mightiest God of all?

Seekers, believers, heathens and philosophers with their point of view
All still seeks for the truth and uphold one they call peace
Inversely proportional to what they always do

Compiling the ideas piece by piece
Who are we without all these idealism?
All still seeks for the truth and uphold one they call peace

At the end world leads to anarchism 
They failed to adhere what they create
Who are we without all these idealism?

The idea of God and religion become skeptical trait
They failed to adhere what they create
Stands on the land of heterodox
People live and die on their equivocation thoughts



*This poem inspired by the contest that held by Richard Lamoureux, which I failed to join, but somehow I come up with this idea. Thank you for the inspiration :D.

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Richard Lamoureux May 1, 2015 at 10:25 AM I enjoyed rereading this one Yanny! This is full of thoughts worth pondering. Yanny Widjanarko May 1, 2015 at 10:53 AM Thank you Rick, this was inspired by your contest. Though at first I tried to answer the challanging stanza that you offered, but somehow, I couldn't. My religious side was yet not in such kind of level. I was still not confident enough to reassure the non-believers about the concept of The Almighty. So, I came up with this idea, which is more familiar to me :D

Hannington Mumo April 27, 2015 at 10:22 AM I think you are the most gifted soul in the whole of Indonesia. You write so well and the words resonate with the reader's thinking...7++! Yanny Widjanarko April 29, 2015 at 1:51 AM Really such a great honor and feelings to have this high appreciation and compliment by you Hannington Mumo. Thank you for stopping by and leaving such an encouragement comment in my page :), have a great day! :D hug, Yanny

Michael Dom April 7, 2015 at 3:28 PM Long time no read, Yanny, and this one is a paradox alright. Cheers & hugs Yanny Widjanarko April 7, 2015 at 8:25 PM Long time no see Mike! :D glad to see ya around, hope that you have a great day there :D hug, yanny

Arthur Vaso April 3, 2015 at 6:04 PM This is so beautiful, your message is also so true! Loved this! Yanny Widjanarko April 4, 2015 at 2:58 AM Thank you arthur vaso, glad that you like it :D, long time no see, wishing you a blessed Easter, hug, yanny

Richard Lamoureux April 3, 2015 at 7:47 AM I am so impressed Yanny, straight to my favorites. I would have scored this one very high. Yanny Widjanarko April 3, 2015 at 8:18 AM Yaayy!! Thank you Rick! You really make my day, hehehe.. Glad to know that you like it, I almost forget to say have a blessed Easter day for you :D hug, yanny

Anne-Lise Andresen April 3, 2015 at 4:50 AM - Dear Yanny, this is amazing !!!! - Truly a pleasure to read, and you have "won" in my eyes :) - A Blessed Easter to you and your family :) - big hug from grandma :) Yanny Widjanarko April 3, 2015 at 7:42 AM Hello grandma from Norway!! :D happy Easter too to you and your beloved :D thank you for stopping by and give such an encouragement comment in this page, your comments always support me to keep writing in poetrysoup even in my tiny minutes :D thank you for all of your support, I will try my best to catch up in my mean time :D, sometimes when I got the idea, it just evaporates in the middle of my hectic time with Ken, so sorry for the long absence