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Paradisiacal

Tranquil the ocean sun sinks sky orange-red with distance comes moon each wave mutes night circling gulls waves and air water and evening infinite horizon... Everything utters night losing shape eyes closing darkness in wind each wave the water sky and moon go together with these words I paint the sky dark...

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Earth Ancestor

Date: 10/15/2014 10:44:00 PM

Ken You Are A Muse Of Nature,Living Juicy!

Ken Carroll

Date: 8/29/2013 1:21:00 PM

Hey M.M.. Thanks good buddy for the compliment...Hope you are well my friend,, regards, Ken

Sandra Adams

Date: 8/29/2013 9:11:00 AM

I am always mesmerized by the sea, the waves...the sunset and full moon over it is beautiful...your poem pulled me in, wrapped me in beauty and that last line, wow....powerful, like a waves crashing against the shore! Great poem

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/29/2013 9:15:00 AM

Hi Sandra, Thanks for the visit and most lovely comment. Ken

Christine Phillips

Date: 8/29/2013 8:16:00 AM

"I paint the sky dark" A very strong line setting the entire tone of this poem.

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/29/2013 8:19:00 AM

Hi Christine, Thanks so much for stopping by today and the wonderful comment as well.. Ken..

Donna Jones

Date: 8/29/2013 7:28:00 AM

Got lost in it!!!!! Wow....

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/29/2013 7:33:00 AM

Hi Donna, Thanks for the wonderful comment and for visiting today,, Ken

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2013 6:32:00 AM

Ahh!! A beautiful scene that you have painted..Enjoyed reading this one today..Sara

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/29/2013 6:40:00 AM

Hi Sara, Thanks for dropping by and reading this one.. Ken

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/29/2013 3:18:00 AM

- A colorful and beautiful poem, Kenneth! - All the best to you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/29/2013 3:35:00 AM

Hi Anne, Thanks for the beautiful comment.. Ken

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 8/29/2013 12:51:00 AM

A great poem..you formatted (?) it well...love the last line. BG

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/29/2013 2:07:00 AM

Hi Barbara, Thank you for the lovely comment.. Ken

Vinayak Pratap

Date: 8/28/2013 10:09:00 PM

VERY COLOURFUL POEM NICE WRITE KEN REALLY ENJOYED ~v~

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/28/2013 10:19:00 PM

Thank you Vinayak for stopping by and leaving kind feedback.. Ken..

Cherl Dunn

Date: 8/28/2013 7:11:00 PM

Very visual and expressive I like it a lot. And thank you for your comments. cheri

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/28/2013 8:12:00 PM

Hi Cheri, Thank you for visiting tonight and leaving a wonderful comment..It was my pleasure to read yours.. Ken..

Sandra Ramacher

Date: 8/28/2013 6:21:00 PM

Hi Kenneth, Firstly thank you for your kind comments on my poem. I was pleasantly surprised to read yours, as I miss nights like that on my veranda in Noosa, the "everything utters night", leaving the mind to reach for memories. Lovely!

Ken Carroll
Date: 8/28/2013 6:52:00 PM

Thank you Sandra for stopping by..It was a delight to read your work as well. Regards, Ken

Ken Carroll

Date: 8/28/2013 5:38:00 PM

Thank you for visiting Linda..The heart speaks and the mind listens.. Muchos Besos, Ken..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/28/2013 5:26:00 PM

Kenneth, this is how i love my free verse poem... amazing.. and deep.... love the infinite horizon... in the heart we paint all kinds of wild horizons... :-)...xox~ Linda