Eve Roper Poet Acrostic

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Paradise-Acrostic

Paradise of timeless peace and harmony  "Divine"!

Amber clouds glow among the rising heaven

River of the prettiest crystal blue wandering water

Align fanning palms trees resting in the sandy shore

Dreams echo through the breeze of lover’s passion entwine

It was surly his heart trembling for the want of her

Soul searching eyes in his sleep as he

Eases on her breast of melodies


12/20/2015


Paradise-Acrostic - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by:John Hamilton

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Skat A December 28, 2015 at 10:20 PM Eve, a very nice win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2015 at 4:24 AM Eve, Congratulations on your win. LINDA

Balveen Cheema December 28, 2015 at 3:35 AM Romance in your own paradise!

Sandra Haight December 27, 2015 at 7:51 PM Beautiful and romantic, Eve. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Robert Lindley December 27, 2015 at 6:36 PM ROMANCE IN PARADISE, the path my sojourn took to express my love for me wife. For what would paradise truly be without our great love there alongside us? A7 Congrats on your win!!

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2015 at 3:20 PM a nice romantic one, Eve. Congrats for your win.

Paul Callus December 27, 2015 at 2:31 PM Such a lovely poem that boasts of captivating imagery which leads to a delightful romantic ending. ~ Congratulations on this worthy win, Eve! ~ Regards & Hugs *~* paul

Beautiful Scars December 27, 2015 at 11:22 AM Eve, congrats on your placement in the Paradise contest! *smiles* *hugs*

Michael Tor December 27, 2015 at 11:15 AM Beautiful Eve. Excellent write.

John Hamilton December 27, 2015 at 12:30 AM Very nice Eve, really enjoyed it! Would have scored higher with rhyme! Maybe next time. Congrats on your placement.

Eric Boddie December 21, 2015 at 10:42 PM I just have to tell you what I think of this....mother and son sharing too much power to resist....the sheer Power Of Love leaves us forever connected....that's just how I saw it, I hope it was expected....very Beautiful eve....;) Eve Roper December 21, 2015 at 11:06 PM I'm not much of a romantic in writing , but I'm learning. Thank you for your awesome help! Eric Boddie December 21, 2015 at 10:59 PM and just to be straight, it is the last 2 lines that inspired this....;)

Bl Devnath December 21, 2015 at 7:31 AM Beautiful poem my lovely friend. Good luck in the contest. Loved always,bl Eve Roper December 21, 2015 at 9:43 AM Thank you, B.L., for always being there supporting me in my work, hugs dear friend