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Paradise Warns

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Creation perfectly wrought designed by God* for mankind precious gift to tend with responsible stewardship… such was magnificent in the beginning a paradise of wonders. Paradise indeed, yet corrupted as inhabitants keep on maligning her elegance of grace-filled beauty --- now … Mother Earth grievously languishes. Mother Earth oh, verily afflicted with men’s exploits while technology soars toward progress’ crest leaving her virgin forests ravaged against original stature: Nature at its best. Nature sighing in desperate disgust at civilization’s arrogance along mocking skeptical mirth never stops to give stern warning tolerating not abuse to planet, once verily functional. Planet offering life brings earnest admonition inflicting guilt…to heed, hopeful we do so, lest in despair wail for wasted creation.
*Genesis 1:1 In the beginning God created the heaven and the earth. June 1, 2021 1st place, "ALL YOURS(JUN 8)" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 6/8/2021.

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Date: 6/17/2021 1:20:00 PM
Yes, we need to take care of mother earth for she does feed us and give us water. Enjoyed reading your very politically correct work. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Date: 6/9/2021 4:09:00 PM
Congratulations Beata: Poets must stand up for Mother Nature. Beautifully written, SuZ
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Date: 6/8/2021 3:12:00 PM
It's sad what has become of God's beautiful creation, but one day it will all be restored. Congrats on your win, Beata! Blessings, Kim M
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