James Fraser Poet Acrostic

Paradise - Upon Golden Sands

Picturesque are these islands of Golden Sands

Amidst hues of bonnie blue in the Sulu Sea

Rearing columns of Palms in heavenly reach

Admiration my eyes granted their canopy glee

Distance is no object as we walk their shores

I and my love in splish splashing paddle dips

She turns takes my hands looking into my soul

Encompassed we're engrossed lips to lips



25/12/2015 @ 15.18pm

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Skat A December 28, 2015 at 10:19 PM James, a very nice win. SKAT James Fraser January 8, 2016 at 4:14 PM Many thanks SKAT. A short poem that I so loved writing ~~ James :)

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2015 at 4:20 AM James, Congratulations on your win. LINDA James Fraser January 8, 2016 at 4:13 PM Hiya Linda, thank you kindly ~~ James :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 28, 2015 at 2:03 AM Great take on theme and a wonderful acrostic James.. congrats on big win!

Sandra Haight December 27, 2015 at 7:38 PM Beautifully written with great imagery, James. Congratulations on your fine win. Sandra

Robert Lindley December 27, 2015 at 6:16 PM James, you described a truly wonderful paradise that you guys can and will enjoy.A7 Congrats on your fine win!!

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2015 at 3:13 PM this is really nicely done, James. BIG congrats on your well deserved win.

Michael Tor December 27, 2015 at 10:53 AM Very nice James enjoyed reading.

Susan Gentry December 27, 2015 at 8:21 AM Congratulations on the 5th place win in the Paradise contest. Very descriptive and romantic.

Paul Callus December 27, 2015 at 3:18 AM So pleased to be back with congratulations, James! Much deserved! ~ Regards // paul James Fraser January 8, 2016 at 4:18 PM Thank you ever so much Paul ~~ James :)

John Hamilton December 27, 2015 at 12:04 AM Thanks James very nice acrostic, congrats on your placement! James Fraser January 8, 2016 at 4:10 PM Thank you kindly John. A belated appreciation for honouring my poem in your fine contest. Kind regards, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 26, 2015 at 7:03 AM James, always I love the memories we have there, I will be so happy to share and embroider a new set of memories there.. =`) hugs tight!!! I love some lines here, the alliteration and the imagery is there.. =`) 2016 is coming!!!~Olive Eloisa =`) James Fraser January 8, 2016 at 4:09 PM Palawan was perfect Olive. Our pics from there are simply oozing us amidst the gorgeous sunshine and warm sands, mmmm ~~ hugs ~~ James xxxx

Paul Callus December 25, 2015 at 3:32 PM How very lovely and romantic, James! The Sulu sea must be endowed with a magical spell:) I shall look out for this one on the winners' list! ~ Regards // paul James Fraser January 8, 2016 at 4:05 PM Thank you Paul. Palawan is absolutely stunning. Our strolls amidst island hopping on beautiful sands was lovely. It's our desire to go back and spend a few days more than before. A blessed weekend to you ~~ kind regards ~~ James :)

Nette Onclaud December 25, 2015 at 1:35 PM heavenly,james... this is truly a paradise of love!..huggs James Fraser January 8, 2016 at 2:18 PM Palawan has gripped Olive and I. We were in awe when we were there. It's our wish to revisit and stay a little longer on the sands. Wishing you a blessed weekend Nette, hugs//James :)

Jan Allison December 25, 2015 at 10:07 AM Oh this sounds like paradise you have found with your lovely soulmate James - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx James Fraser December 25, 2015 at 10:31 AM We liked there so much, we're definitely going back. This time for more time on the beach ~~ hugs ~~ James xx