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PARADISE PARADOX

PARADISE PARADOX What does heaven look like without her? A p e a r l y gate where t e a r s ensue Where g o l d e n streets are turning blue And his pretty d o v e has gone a s k e w 12/3/2017 Unanswered Questions Poetry Contest Juli-Michelle

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Date: 5/5/2018 7:05:00 PM
A beautiful whimsical piece. Congrats on your win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2018 7:20:00 PM
Thanks, Line!
Date: 1/30/2018 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Kim. :))
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2018 5:19:00 PM
Thank you, Roy!
Date: 1/29/2018 7:09:00 PM
Sad imagery for sure, Kim. Congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2018 7:11:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 1/29/2018 4:18:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your win ...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2018 7:11:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 1/29/2018 3:20:00 PM
the title is perfect to compliment your poem , many congrats on your win Kim:-) hugs jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/29/2018 3:47:00 PM
Thank you, Jan! ...Hugs, Kim
Date: 12/4/2017 10:19:00 AM
Kim, lovely! Best of luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2017 1:43:00 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 12/4/2017 7:51:00 AM
A wonderfully clever question creatively put for the contest Kim~good luck in it!~Che :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2017 1:43:00 PM
Thank you, Che!
Date: 12/4/2017 7:25:00 AM
A well depicted unanswered question--creatively expressed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2017 7:27:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
Date: 12/4/2017 12:59:00 AM
Clever and imagery to draw the reader in, you have used writing tools to impressive the reader on a flight read of soaring feel and imagery. Most enoyable. All the best ... CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/4/2017 7:00:00 AM
Thank you CayCay!