Paradise Lost

PARADISE LOST

P oisonous minds roamed in Valley of joy, 
A nd their mission was to kill and destroy.
R uthless bullets pierced the innocent hearts,
A ngry devils tried to tear the Valley apart.
D eath danced every street, none could flee,
I struggled to breathe, as fear consumed me. 
S ilently, world-watched attack on humanity,
E ven weather was merciless in Jan of 1990.

L eft my land to survive in unknown place,
O nly hope I carried, to march in life’s race. 
S o many years gone, Valley still screams,
T oday Kashmir is safe only in my dreams.



Jan 17, 2017.
MESSAGE IN AN ACROSTIC - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues


Kashmir, God's own land on earth, is the motherland of Kashmiri Pandits. The year 1990, saw a mass exodus of Kashmiri Pandits from their own soil due to threat to their life and, brutal and barbaric killings by the separatists. 
More than 400,000 Kashmiri Pandits were forced to abandon their homeland.
Even today after so many years of mass exodus, their ordeal continues....

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Date: 9/8/2021 12:43:00 AM
powerful write! Why did not the Indian Government do anything about it! I hope the land comes back to you! You are the rightful owners of the place!
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Date: 9/6/2021 9:21:00 AM
The message is clear and concise. Although we too often try to wish sad memories into oblivion, it's profitable to face what they entail for our future. Great hidden message, Meenakshi
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Date: 9/5/2021 3:58:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Meenakshi. I completely understand the pain of leaving your motherland - you have expressed in this poem. Kashmir Valley is almost Heaven on Earth - the beauty is incomparable! I visited Kashmir many years ago, and feel sad that probably will never visit again. Love and hugs ~ Mala
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Date: 1/22/2017 11:59:00 AM
Great poem and a sad ongoing story. Congratulations on your win Meenakshi :-)
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 1/23/2017 7:08:00 AM
Thank you Mark...
Date: 1/21/2017 5:19:00 PM
A most well deserved win! I enjoyed your acrostic and its hidden message. Kinda fun to write, huh? Congratulations! Poetry hugs, CayCay
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 1/23/2017 7:07:00 AM
Thank you CayCay.....
Date: 1/21/2017 4:09:00 PM
such a powerful message and it is so sad to read your explanatory poets notes:-( many congrats Meenakshi I am so glad this is on the list - thanks for sharing:-) hugs Jan xx
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 1/23/2017 7:04:00 AM
Thank you Jan...
Date: 1/21/2017 3:14:00 PM
Meenakshi, this really touched my heart! I learned about the hurt! Was this about you? God grant this world peace!
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Meenakshi Raina
Date: 1/23/2017 7:01:00 AM
Thank you Kim...Yes it was about me and my community ....we were forced to abandon our homes and never went back...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2017 3:14:00 PM
Congrats!
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