Paradise Lost

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paradise lost in gentle eyes that twitch at sounds ~ garden of eden posted on May 3, 2023

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Karen Croft

Date: 4/23/2024 9:42:00 PM

I could feel this haiku! Enjoyed reading

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/4/2023 6:55:00 PM

Dear, dear John Milton!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2023 8:36:00 PM

lol ~ thanks, Gershon

Ann Foster

Date: 5/4/2023 3:03:00 PM

Beautiful. Ann

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2023 8:37:00 PM

Thanks, Ann. Much appreciated

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/4/2023 5:56:00 AM

Line, this is gorgeous! First the pic! I dreamt about deer the other day, as vivid as this and adore coneflowers! Love your poem. A fave, in fact! God bless!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2023 8:37:00 PM

Thank you very much, Kim. Most appreciated ~