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Paradise Is Falling

the lawns are strewn in paradise roses stained, unsweetened beauty is bleeding can we lick these festering sores? my days are alchemy as I exhaust to turn a gold and paradise is falling

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Mat Ignacio

Date: 5/22/2024 7:21:00 PM

a powerful write, strong opening lines imbued with a deeper sense of longing - glad i came across this

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 5/23/2024 4:46:00 AM

Thanks Mat

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/13/2024 12:56:00 AM

Beautiful poetry. I am at a loss for words to say more.

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 4/13/2024 3:00:00 AM

Thanks Arthur

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/10/2024 10:10:00 AM

Hello Clive, your poem evokes a poignant sense of loss amidst beauty's decay. The imagery of roses stained and beauty bleeding is hauntingly powerful. Your words artistically capture the struggle to salvage paradise amidst decay, echoing the relentless pursuit of alchemy in our daily lives. - Blessings, Daniel

Clive Culverhouse
Date: 4/10/2024 2:29:00 PM

Hi Daniel, I really appreciated your analysis of my poem, thank you for reading and taking the time to respond