Paradise Found 2

Were I to swim to the edge of the sea,
what splendid scene should await for me?
Would I behold the legendary town
with glittering brick roads and king’s famed crown?
 
Could I uncover the truth in the seed, 
win a place in the king’s absolute creed? 
Anoint my body, in sticky sap drown,
paddle to Guatavita and dive down.

Arise from the waters clean as a bead,
to the fest of El Dorado I’d lead. 
No other exists so gilded, hands down,
an existence of gold — building and gown.

I’d join with the Muiscan folk, indeed
take up residence and full life proceed
to build again a foundation so sound
that none could purloin the gold around.

World befallen by avarice and greed,
best forgotten I hardily accede.
To such golden place without up or down
I’d ever exist in paradise found.
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Brul Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 8:35 AM
Excellent rendition of sublime thoughts. Wonderful! A fave for me to read again and again.
Fowler Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 8:41 AM
Oh so many thanks! I appreciate your read, comment and fav! Linda
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