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Paradise Found 2

Were I to swim to the edge of the sea, what splendid scene should await for me? Would I behold the legendary town with glittering brick roads and king’s famed crown? Could I uncover the truth in the seed, win a place in the king’s absolute creed? Anoint my body, in sticky sap drown, paddle to Guatavita and dive down. Arise from the waters clean as a bead, to the fest of El Dorado I’d lead. No other exists so gilded, hands down, an existence of gold — building and gown. I’d join with the Muiscan folk, indeed take up residence and full life proceed to build again a foundation so sound that none could purloin the gold around. World befallen by avarice and greed, best forgotten I hardily accede. To such golden place without up or down I’d ever exist in paradise found.

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Date: 8/13/2022 8:35:00 AM
Excellent rendition of sublime thoughts. Wonderful! A fave for me to read again and again.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/13/2022 8:41:00 AM
Oh so many thanks! I appreciate your read, comment and fav! Linda

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